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Powerless by nachteule
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From: metalidentity
Date: 2014-06-20
Chapter: 1
you write really good!!! i like your style :3 this story is really sad though....poor brad
From: Hayley
Date: 2014-03-25
Chapter: 1
AND YOU ALWAYS GET MAD WHEN I CALL YOUR BRAIN BRILLIANT. DO YOU KNOW HOW BEAUTIFUL THIS WAS??? OH MY GOD IT LEFT ME DAMN CRYING :') How are you not a famous author yet I mean my English teacher would approve of this completely xD Rated a 10 :3 Oh! And I'm SO SORRY I've disappeared from your reviews lately D: School has been so hectic I barely had any time! I'm currently catching up on In My Remains :) so I'll definitely be a loyal reviewer as soon as I'm done! :D Keep up the BRILLIANT work that your brain oh-so-kindly creates for our entertainment :P Ok that sounds a bit weird o.o Update soon!
From: Crimson
Date: 2014-03-24
Chapter: 1
"Lyrics are Powerless by Linkin Park. Duh, right?" I couldn't help but laugh at that xD but ouch my feels ;-; that was so sad! But so beautiful and so honest. It was deep, and you write these types of things so well. I want more of these things from you, and I expect more e__e haha this was amazing! I loved the part talking about how he should have lived by what he had preached. That's such a true statement for so many people. They help others, but not themselves, and when they are ruined, so are the people they helped. It's just a wasted effort in the end. But I really really liked this! :)
From: Emma Shinoda
Date: 2014-03-24
Chapter: 1
Nooo, Braddles :( This was so sad, it made my eyes water. But it was beautifully written, I could really feel Rob's pain and emptiness. I really liked that you did it from Rob's point of view, instead of Mike which might be expected. You always think outside the box with your writing, which is really awesome. I never know what to expect when I see a new story from you, except that it'll be amazing. I really loved this, I'm glad you posted it!
From: wz
Date: 2014-03-24
Chapter: 1
Nooo this was too sad I can't handle it :( The word Widowed cleared things up, I was confused till that part but it was so well put... I'm feeling so bad right now, oh my. It was good, I loved it but still hurt a lot to read. You have to definitely make more, there weren't typos at all.
Definitely rated 10
From: Mikey boy
Date: 2014-03-24
Chapter: 1
Not many authors write these stuff I guess. While I was reading, I was like: 'Wait, hold on, what was that?' That means it made me wonder, and that's what makes this story special. I really like the matching with the lyrics of Powerless, it really shows how empty Rob feels, and his pain. I'd say that that kind of pain wasn't really sad (though I did feel sad), but I believe it hurts even more; losing somebody when that person taught you to be strong. Well, although I don't know what happened, I do like this one. Good job! Looking forward to reading more from you! :-)
From: bennodaloves
Date: 2014-03-24
Chapter: 1
BRAAADDDDD NOOO ;-;
I wonder what happened .-.
OH EM.GEE I LVE THIS SO MUCH MAKW MOREE MAKE MORE IT WAS AMAZING
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From: Hazle Grace
Date: 2015-03-30
Chapter: 1
And now I feel like I'm going to cry, Jesus. I loved it. I hate stories about death yet love them at the same time. At least when they are done correctly and I feel things, which I just did reading this.