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Glory Days by Crimson

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From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-04-01

Chapter: 8

Wow, I love more assertive Chester! Finally he stood up for himself, but I'm glad he and Captain Shinoda aren't fighting anymore. I wonder what is up with Rob though??? Why is he so touchy feely with Chester all of a sudden? Hmmm, I just can't figure him out...


I loved the dialogue between Chester and the Captain in this chapter, and almost squealed when he told Chester he's addicted to him. And as always, the slash was hottt. Great job, update soon!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-03-31

Chapter: 8

Mmm Rob knows Mike ohh so well, lol.

From: wz

Date: 2014-03-31

Chapter: 8

What the hell is wrong with Rob?! Why can't he mind his business? The way he's acting makes me believe he has some sort of crush on Chester, does he? Well, even if he does, that's not someone he can reach. I hate when people stumble on others' relationships like that just because they want to have "something". I hope the captain will defend what's his.

The last part was really hot, you write every day better, but I loved this story since the beginning. The end of this chapter is thoughtful.. He doesn't love the captain? Then why does he try to get along so well and have him close?

I'm waiting for a next update! <3

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-03-30

Chapter: 8

Im not sure about what a plan Rob was making about but I don't like it. however, I want to say I love Chester's character here, some aggressive but more submissive.

From: bennodaloves

Date: 2014-03-30

Chapter: 8

We'll crimson,

I hope you have a good time updating these stories.

They take a lot of time huh?

Its nice to know you take time away from talking to people who thought that you cared about them and over them, and use that time to write these.

don't get me wrong,

They are amazing.

But maybe you should actually talk to people who love you and missed you.

Who got so excited to talk to you again after the time they were apart from you.

But,

hell.

You don't have to cause they feel like they never should've met you.

From: nab

Date: 2014-03-26

Chapter: 7

Omg. What a cliffhanger. Please let chester be ok. could there be a love triangle in the future? And it would be great to see the Joe,brad and phoenix in action

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-03-26

Chapter: 7

Hottttt slash scene! I love that even during sex they manage to argue and sass each other. Rob is acting really weird, what is up with him?!? I'm not sure if he likes Chester now or is plotting something, but either way it kinda freaks me out, haha. And the end, damn I hope Chester is okay! He better not go dying on us now! I gotta know what happens next, update soon! :)

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-03-26

Chapter: 7

l love how insanely hot things can be getting between those two, yet they can still manage to give each other shit and be total smart arses. On an unrelated matter; Rob is creeping me the hell out and I think maybe he should jump overboard and cool off.


But the end?! What?! Did Chester fall??? Oh you and your bloody cliffhangers. Update soon!!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-03-26

Chapter: 7

*nose bleeding* naughty bennoda boys were so hot, I can't help it. In the end of this chapter, seems Chester fall off? Oh no, he was gonna be okay, right? Poor one, always wanted to proof himself but failed everytime.

From: wz

Date: 2014-03-26

Chapter: 7

You know, I just love the way they are with each other, all those flirty moments and comments, I can't help but smile at it. The description is amazing, I have to compliment you once again for it, really. The end of the chapter gives me a sense of anxiety.. Keep it up!

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-03-23

Chapter: 6

Ohhh Rob's up to something, I think Chester's right not to trust him. Having said that though, I'm glad he's staying on board. I just can't wait to see what's gonna happen next and when Rob's information will be shared

From: Melissa Oliveira

Date: 2014-03-22

Chapter: 6

what will rob ready?

I'm loving the fic, very good indeed

From: wz

Date: 2014-03-22

Chapter: 6

Oh man unfinished stories are so painful Haahah please go on!

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-03-22

Chapter: 6

Sorry Rob, but I don't trust you! He has something planned, but he better not touch Chester or Captain Shinoda may just throw him overboard. I'm glad Chester's finally gonna become a pirate! Ooh, this is getting so good, update soon!

From: nab

Date: 2014-03-22

Chapter: 6

Update update update please. I can't wait to see what rob will do. He seems to know who chester is

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2014-03-21

Chapter: 6

Oh my...what was rob going to do? I don't feel right about him. Would him threaten Chester because he already knew something??

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-03-20

Chapter: 5

This chapter made me laugh. Like, all the way through I was chuckling. It was good after all the drama and suspense. BUT! I still want to know what that guy told Rob, and does that have something to do with the crew being nowhere around? Awesome, funny chapter though. Update soon!

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2014-03-18

Chapter: 5

Great chapter, I loved the part where Chester buttoned up Captain Shinoda's shirt before they ran off. The way you write Chester's thoughts is perfect, I find myself laughing a lot because he's so cute and innocent. And of course, Shinoda being a badass and killing the two chasing him was awesome! Can't wait for more, update soon!

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-03-18

Chapter: 5

And rated 10 :) fully deserved

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-03-18

Chapter: 5

Incredibly well written and totally creative! You have a great flair for narration and description, it's excellent! :) Please continue the good work, this was an awesome read (even though I started late) HAHAHA

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