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Adventures In Chocolate by Emma Shinoda

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From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2019-08-17

Chapter: 1

Much like your other “Adventures In...”, this was hot. I really do love your slash. <3 And the ending is a perfect mix of funny/cute. Mike’s right. Chester does owe him a damn chocolate :D haha

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-05-10

Chapter: 1

oww no.. dominant chester... I dont support it at all like m.s. said, uhhh. but I like how you write and hope future stories have something else ^ ^)

From: BennodaLPFangirl

Date: 2014-03-28

Chapter: 1

God, this is such a good story. I don't typically see Chester as the dominant one but you wrote it convincingly. Amazing fic.

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-03-20

Chapter: 1

*chaptered, sorry my phone changed chaptered to chartered HAHAHA

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-03-20

Chapter: 1

I have to say that I don't believe in Chester being on top at all, nor do I support it, but for real, this was written brilliantly, extremely well, with the right description and the right punch lines. You are really, really talented and it was amazing to see something written this good. Do put up your chartered stories, I'm looking forward to them! This was really well written!

From: Blackeyes

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

That was really REALLY good! This is your first ever story on this site and it's already that good. I can't wait to read your next stories:) Great job!

From: Mr.Chicken

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

this was very nice to read first thing in the morning....asdfghjkl


Very very VERY good :3

From: MissBikeFinoda

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

Very well written, your writing will only grow stronger with such a good foundation (: congratulations on your first submission here!

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

:O You uploaded something, yay!! This was just perfect. Just enough fluff, just enough smut, just perfect. Great job for your first go at slash too, I can't write it to save my life. I'm so glad you posted this, and I can't wait for your multi-chapter!

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

I saw the title and the description and thought yay another oneshot slash valentines story! Then I saw your name! I was like wait...this must be her first! And it was damn good. Great, actually. I loved it! Awesome details, hot slash, a good amount of fluff, perfect! I was aw-ing when Chester returned to the room to see Mike standing there with the chocolate and roses, so adorable! I can't wait for the chaptered story! Awesome job!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

No more chocolate for you Shinoda, lol.

From: Mikey boy

Date: 2014-02-15

Chapter: 1

I am glad you decided to write a story for your own, and even though i don't like slash, I have to admit this was really good written! I can't stop laughing at Chester's reaction when he finally saw "le shirtless Shinoda"! Great job. Looking forward to reading more stories!

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