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Elementary School Games by Crimson

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From: xxLyssaxx

Date: 2014-07-15

Chapter: 1

sequel? very nice xD

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2013-10-06

Chapter: 1

Great story!

You write really well, interesting characters and the plot, simple but very touching.

Write more!

Paula

From: Mikeyy shinizzle

Date: 2013-10-05

Chapter: 1

So amazing, is there gonna be more. You left it on kind of a cliff hanger. I wanna read more.

From: Vixenla

Date: 2013-10-05

Chapter: 1

Ohhh man, those two......lol

From: Meg Louise

Date: 2013-10-05

Chapter: 1

This is really good, I like how you didn't put too little or too much description! Maybe you should try a story and not just a one shot because you can show how good you are at writing like that, well done. Oh and the slash was really good, I know it was your first time writing it but you did a good job :D

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