Reviews
The Wonderful Yet Horrible Existence Of Chocolate In A Tour Bus by Hayley
From: TMIsaacs1
Date: 2013-06-18
Chapter: 1
XDXDXD SO RANDOM I LOVE IT!!!!! XD
My favorite part was the end where Mike is like, "MOMMY I GOT A BOO BOO!!!" XDXD
This short story made my day (by the way I hate reading so the length of the story was perfect for me!)
Great job you two! :)
From: Grey Daze
Date: 2013-06-07
Chapter: 1
HOLY SHIT AHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAH
MY SIDES...THEY HURT
FROM LAUGHING
THIS...THIS STORY IS PERFECTION. <3
I lol'd so much at the way they talk, and they way they always yell, reminds me of myself XD
Also the cat on his head...XDDDD
Poor kitty was assaulted by chocolate!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more soon...this made my day brighter XD
By the way, a collab between you two rocks! I met Mina on the chatroom the other day and she was epic!
And you're epic too! Perfect combination, see?
UPDATE SOOOONNN
<3,
Danni
From: Maximum
Date: 2013-06-07
Chapter: 1
I read around a pointy object
Fuck. It hurts.
BUT IT WAS TOTALLY WORTH IT. xD
From: Purple Vampire
Date: 2013-06-07
Chapter: 1
Poor kitty (well I love cats haha) XD
I find this chapter funny but I'm not supposed to laugh 'cause it's 10:30 PM right here and everyone's sleeping. XD
Mike, don't eat chocolate on hair. That can be very dangerous. And Chester, don't put a cat in your head, JUST GIVE IT TO ME ON THE COUNT OF THREE. (here I go again, my sarcastic side's back)
From: RazorRedNoise
Date: 2013-06-07
Chapter: 1
I'd say this belongs more in a chapter of Willy Wonka love. And I am British lol everyone likes to make fun of british accents on here:P This is the most random hyper story I've ever read but sort of puts me in the mood for chocolate. I'm going to have some now.
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From: Ms.Jawbreaker
Date: 2013-07-17
Chapter: 2
Awww haha this was cute and funny! However, is it just me, or is this a BIG Bennoda story?
:3