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From: Mikey boy

Date: 2014-01-18

Chapter: 14

This story is just amazing. I am a tough person, but when I read this chapter, I cried. I cried, just don't know why, maybe because I want the last chapter and I want Mike to see Anna again. Great job! Please, update the last one!

From: Babybear

Date: 2013-09-09

Chapter: 14

Haha I appreciate your sympathy xD Sorry for the late review!!!! I was in Oregon for the Shakespeare festival! It was such an interesting experience, but I'll tell you about it later ;) Wow, okay why would Mike believe his mother after all of those years? I don't know how he could trust her after everything that happened...but I have a feeling they'll run into each other :P there better be a happy ending!!!!! I'm holding you accountable for one lol. Well, at least she was "innocent". Seven years is better than 30 in a nasty prison, but it's equally as terrible. So good job, and I'm sad that it's almost over!!!!!! See? --> :( update soon!!! PS we need another movie night!!! :D

From: soccerchick

Date: 2013-09-07

Chapter: 14

She did her time and now she finally gets to go home and hopefully lead a normal life. I really hope she gets to see Mike again, so he can know that she's alive and well and they can finally be happy together. You've done a great job with this, bring on the last chapter!

From: Lexikitten

Date: 2013-09-07

Chapter: 14

Aww I feel sorry for Anna:( Seven years is a long time. But at least all the pieces fall into place now and we understand what happened and how she ended up in there. But will she ever see Mike again?

From: Sweetgirl

Date: 2013-09-07

Chapter: 14

Let's just cut to the chase here. Are Anna and Mike going to reunite? Cuz from the sounds of things, Mike thinks Anna is dead and he hasn't come to visit her in seven years...so it seems to me like this story may not have such a happy ending but of course I could be wrong. I hope I'm wrong cuz their love was so strong and inspiring and I'd hate to see it all come to an end:(

From: nachteule

Date: 2013-09-06

Chapter: 14

Woooow, I only just found this - a little late I know as you're about to finish it - but I LOVE it! You're such a great writer, and it's such an intense story. Adding to my faves :) So... Anna is alive and being discharged? Mrs. Shinoda lied? That bitch. I really hope it's not gonna be a Romeo and Juliet type thing, and by the time Anna finds him it's too late. They both deserve happiness after all they've been through, and their love is so beautiful it would be a shame to cut it short. Anyway, can't wait for the conclusion, whatever happens :)

From: War Cat

Date: 2013-09-05

Chapter: 14

Mrs. Shinoda lied to Mike!! Anna, go and find him and now you two can be happy together finally:)

From: Nikia Falcon

Date: 2013-09-05

Chapter: 14

Good thing Anna was found not guilty, she really was just defending herself. Seven years in a mental hospital sucks though, and must be pretty lonely and depressing. Poor Mike:( Wait, if Anna's being released, then she didn't really commit suicide? Holy shit, that scared me to death!! Figures that Mrs. Shinoda would make that up to try and get Mike to move on. Wow I knew she was cold but...wow. Well now that she's getting out, will she go back to Mike? Update soon please!

From: Mins2MidniteLP

Date: 2013-08-05

Chapter: 13

I love it!!! The only problem I have.... which is a huge one... Is that you aren't updating fast enough!!!

From: War Cat

Date: 2013-07-28

Chapter: 13

Wtf is wrong with Mrs. Shinoda?? She's so psycho bitch!! Damn Anna and Mike almost got caught! They are gonna get caught though aren't they? Noo I want them to be together!!

From: soccerchick

Date: 2013-07-28

Chapter: 13

Well at least one of the females I fucking hate is gone. Be nice if Mrs. Shinoda would fuck off too. Man she's so annoying. Your husband us dying stupid bitch!! And all you can think about is money and how best you can run your son's life?? You don't even really love him if your trying to control him and use him for your own personal gain. I'm glad he told her ass off and went after Anna cuz he's making decisions for himself. And right now Anna needs him. Don't know where she got off to but I hope he finds her soon!

From: MouseKat

Date: 2013-07-28

Chapter: 13

Hm, this sorta confuses me. Anna killed Lisa but, instead of running away with Mike and making her "bad" couldn't she have called the cops and say she did it out of self-defense? Say that her aunt abused her mentally and physically abused and kidnapped her. AND Mrs. Shinoda slapped her, which could be charged as "unwanted physical contact" right? Meh, probably not. And that would throw Mrs. Shinoda's sorry ass in jail. Haha, but if that happened it would be too easy. And I get the feeling that there won't be a happy ending:/


Hopefully Mike finds Anna! Stupid Mrs. Shinoda why can't she just drop dead?! Oh well, please update soon!☺

From: MouseKat

Date: 2013-07-28

Chapter: 13

Hm, this sorta confuses me. Anna killed Lisa but, instead of running away with Mike and making her "bad" couldn't she have called the cops and say she did it out of self-defense? Say that her aunt abused her mentally and kidnapped her. AND Mrs. Shinoda slapped her, which could be charged as "unwanted physical contact" right? Meh, probably not. And that would throw Mrs. Shinoda's sorry ass in jail. Haha, but if that happened it would be too easy. And I get the feeling that there won't be a happy ending:/


Hopefully Mike finds Anna! Stupid Mrs. Shinoda why can't she just drop dead?! Oh well, please update soon!☺

From: Nikia Falcon

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 13

Oh no Anna's gone! Where did she go? I hope Mike finds her soon before the police do! That was nice of that man to cover for them even though he doesn't know what the hell is going on. Ugh Mrs. Shinoda is sooo fucking annoying. She just needs to vanish from this story. Some ppl just really irk me and she's one of em. I can't believe it's almost over though! I hope Anna and Mike will be together!

From: Lexikitten

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 13

Hell yeah Lisa had it coming! She's been terrible to Anna and with her phobia of physical contact of course she'd feel threatened! Mike was there for her and told that drunk bitch off. I loved the scene between them, they are so cute together and deserve each other. They're gonna get caught pretty soon though obviously...

From: Wake0916

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 13

First of all that bitch of an aunt she had deserved it. She was a complete and total bitch and she made Anna's life miserable. I think Mike's mom should die too cause honestly she is as worthless as aunt Lisa and I'm my opinion she is just a waste of oxygen. Mike is my hero. I mean he stood up to his worthless mother who is nothing more than a drunk for the girl that meant something special for him. Anna is no to blame cause she did it to defend herself. I really hope Mike finds her and they life their love like it should be without the interruptions of stupid people. Awesome update and please update soon.

From: Sweetgirl

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 13

Well I don't believe that Anna did it on purpose, and if she gets put away for this then it's not fair. She was scared and Aunt Lisa was attacking her! Plus with her phobia and all, that only made things that much worse. It's good that Mike stood up to his mom and was there for Anna though. They should just run away together! But now Anna's gone. Where the hell did she go?? Update soon! I missed this story:p

From: Babybear

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 13

Haha oh, wow. xD I'm so outta it today. I thought you updated Desperation so at first I was like O.o haha I was so confused! Then it all made sense when I checked the title. Silly me ^.^ so wow, I'm glad that the aunt is gone, because she was human garbage. Now they gotta worry about the police! I have a bad feeling that they'll get caught though :/ hopefully they won't be separated though! Well good job and update soon! Can't wait for Wednesday ;)

From: Babybear

Date: 2013-07-05

Chapter: 12

Woooow! Wooooooooow! Another cliff hanger lol. So now it's all connecting, with her encounters in the mental hospital. Did she kill her aunt? I have a feeling that something bad just happened. So let's just assume that she killed her aunt. Now is she gonna ask Mike for help? Of course he'll do everything he can to help her, but his mom would try to stop it by talking to the police. But would she do that if Mike helped Anna and was part of the crime too? Hmm...so if we assume that she IS still alive, is Anna gonna run away? Aww she and Mike should run away together xD somewhere far away from her aunt. Well, they can do that even if she killed her aunt. Hell, they should do that. I'm just hoping that the ending of this is gonna be at least somewhat happy, but I'm not so sure at this point. Well sorry for the late reply, and great job as usual! Movie night was fun, we should totally do it again sometime soon :P Update please!

From: Lexikitten

Date: 2013-07-04

Chapter: 12

I knew it!! I knew it would be her aunt but I also knew it would end up being some kind of accident or something and I don't think that she intentionally killed her. She was frightened and panicked and her aunt was freakin attacking her! So it was self defense. If she pleads self defense they shouldn't put her away but the criminal justice system is pretty screwed up

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