those boys are so fucking rude! I can't believe Chester would put up with that shit. Damn and his wife is a bitch. Man. Ches has got some patience to not have said anything totally bitchy back to them. What's next?! Tell me more! Tell me more! :)

WoW welcome back! The beginning was really great. You gave us some interesting clues. Poor Chester, he indeed needed some time to relax. Well there was a big family of him. Sometimes it would be annoyed. Let alone his 8 years old boy tried to hate him. Hummm I'm extremely curious about what the trip would be like. Being with his best friend( and seems more than it) and his hateful boy, this trip would change his life.

aaawww...sad...ok I want more :)

D: this is so depressing!! I love this vibe in a fic tho, it's not always just rainbows nd lolipops ya know?omg Poor tyler! :'o i can't wait till ur next update :)

Awwww :( I hope they don't act like that in real life!!!! That was so sad....Draven was such a brat >.< and Talinda didn't even say goodbye????? Poor Tyler :/ but it was good :) update soon! oh, and welcome back :P