oh im late for review. How clever Chester was. Pretending to being dizzy and winning time for themself. i hope Mike would show up soon, i mean, Chester couldnt do the same thing all time...im looking forward to the next chap. i wanna know what Mike was doing and his plan.

I LOVE the song! And I LOVE this chap! So much!

Asses why you can wrote those beautiful words always? XD I wanna peep your brain! LOL

Ohhhh poor dear chaz, wanna hug him, and I love him at there too, kinda different feeling and that is a good thing at there! I addicted to him hahaha, you know me!

Can't wait to read more! This is legendary! Muaaaa~

ooh chester you clever boy. *giggles* i love this story! just for you to know so you wouldn't think otherwise. hee. i love it. and i wants more. so write. i'm so tired after my supah awesome first school day so sorry if this review is stupid. although all my reviews are kinda redundant and stupid but oh well.

Yay! so happy you updated & so glad that I finally got the chance to read this chappie :D

as always your so freakin' AWESOME!

Chapter 3

First:I love romantic way how Mike and his love have meet.And how polite and shy he was XD it really melted my heart.

Second: I`m falling in love in your Mike-as well as his teen version and his adult one

Third: I don`t think about this story as a parody-but this could be some epic version XD I don`t think Homer wouldn`t mind it XD

Fourth: I`m waiting for another chap,you meanie XD and Chester`s decision XD It`s your fault,that I`m addicted to this story :P

Chapter 2:

This is why I just LOVE your style-even if you`re describing a short,brief moment in your character`s life,it`s so plastic and full of details,that I`m feeling like I can see,feel and think just everything he is experiencing.And this is the reason why I just love your stories.I have to tell you,that you`re one of a kind,unique and I`m glad that you didn`t stop writing.I`ve a feeling that I`m another person,reading your story...maybe richer in some things and experiences that I`ve never seen of felt.You don`t even know,how does it mean to me...

First of all,I have to apologize that I`m reviewing sooo late <you`re at third chap and I`m starting with first> but you at least know that I liked this first chap earlier. <can it be some kind of explanation?>

So-my feelings about chapter 1:

First-way of scriving forced me to use Google translator XD and counting chapters-first made me smile broadly,you know why XD

As for plot-I knew what was your inspiration,but I always wondered,how it`s possibile to miss someone for so long,not wanting to arrange your life again...because-even if your belloved will come back,won`t be the same person who left you...and you won`t be this same too. It`s inevitable.And it`s hard to forgive,that your love left you and wasn`t with you in your hard times.I`m waiting and hoping that you`ll explain it to me <because your way of presenting someone`s motives and thoughts is very reasonable to me >

And the last thing-it`s hard to be a bird in the gilded cage,even when you are treated as a most honoured guest.

Goddess! you cant be so beautiful every chapter! Every scene you showed us was unbelievable amazing. I deeply love how Mike met his lover, Chester the fair male nymph, in a forest. That was a beautiful tale.

I wonder when Mike would be back home...

BTW dont worry, i think it is not parody.<3

Firstly; Thank you for dedicating this to me <3 you didn't have too!

Secondly; I'm now not confused after reading chap 3 (before your adding words at the end xD!!). I knew a bit about the battle of troy, as well :).

I think I read the Odyssey at Primary School.. It seems familiar to me!

Thirdly; But omg, it is fantastic!! You're righting is truly amazing. Now that it makes more sense to me, the story just comes alive in my mind!

Fourthly; I can't wait to read more of this, but it is fantastic - like all your work :D <3

fuck it. that review was for chap 2 -_-

Me, being me.. Is still slightly confused.. I know nothing about Greek Mythology - that probably doesn't help!! But from what I can gather, Chaz has to marry someone other then Mike?

I have no idea..

It's amazingly written though, and the fact that I'm not 100% sure what's going on brings me back to read more EVERY time, without fail.

It is beautifully written. Can't wait to read more :D! <3

aw i love the banner so much! seems so beautiful and fit this story! ><

the dignified feeling around the words that moving in some way, i like it so much, i dont really know the plot of Homer's Odyssey in fact, but anyways, in your story i get the feeling of the age. and the relationship between chaz and mike was amazing >< aww

great chap! LOVE it so much! :P

WHEE

omgomgomg I love you sooo much! this story is great! I'm really loving it and am so happy to be reading something new of yours.

the way your writing this fic is just beautiful, and omg I can't wait to read more! :D

Okay i read the first chapter again...and i was like "OMG NOOOOOO" they have departed in a decade! And now they would marry someone they dont love when they were still longing for each other. More important, they also had a cute and strong daughter. It was so cruel!

I bet Mike didnt know what was happening in his homeland right now, otherwise he would do anything to return to his famliy. Weep* It was sad to see that Chester had to choose some evil person be his consort.

>< aw chaz feels very graceful at there, and he was really missed his husband, the feeling sad, to wait someone maybe never come back, to hold the last hope to live.

and i like the girl, she is very strong in some way.

this single-parent family, i wanna hug them both.

beautiful work! LOVE this chap and your writing always! :3 MUA~

OH GOD WHY DO YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY. already the first sentence was captivating. *sighs happily*

oh poor tséster, waiting and yearning. and i love daphne, brave girl. must've gotten that from her father. but hey that's a freaking cliffhanger! that means that i'll keep whining until you update again! eeeeek

What a fantastic story, my dear. I love reading them, mainly because I love your writing style and the way you always leave us thinking about what you wrote, in a good way. Like I once said, it can look like it's really complex, but once you start reading, you realize how beautiful it us. I hope you'll write more about this one soon :)

amazing work, it feeling very wonderful XP maybe the pic you posted at the end intensified this feeling? XD

seems Mr.Shinoda playing a big game...awww! anyways! that made me very very interested! and i said that many time, i LOVE your style!! so MUCH! <333!

GREAT work! cant wait to read more! :D

Interesting! I like AU bennoda, expecially in some ancient time. Hehe can't wait to see what happens next!