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The treasure of the heart by vickykun
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From: Bennoda_Lover
Date: 2012-06-16
Chapter: 20
I don't think your stupid. Quite the opposite actually: )
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-06-16
Chapter: 20
I'm sorry i forgot to review the last chapter. Damn i remembered i wrote a review for this, i don't know why i didn't post it. Sorry anyway. I add this.
I'm gald to see they got over it, both of them. I guess they would have a beautifull baby, Mike's baby as soon as possible.
From: Bennoda_Lover
Date: 2012-06-13
Chapter: 18
So thats the reason why...... I wonder if Ches will tell Mike that the baby wasn't his though and Mike's reacton :l
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-06-12
Chapter: 18
The baby is Jay's? But how? I mean, Jay was not Chester's truly love, right?...how could he make Chester pregnant?
From: DaisyTelly
Date: 2012-06-12
Chapter: 18
Hahaha I knew it !! I thkin it was stupid that Chester slept with Jay like a whore -.- I don´t see why he should do that, and why Mike was okay with it. Anyway I have a feeling that Chester doesn´t love Mike...hmm...in my eyes Chester is cold.
Update soon :)
From: DaisyTelly
Date: 2012-06-10
Chapter: 17
On no !!! Poor Baby :''(
you are so mean !! xPPP
I was wondering if it was Mikes Baby after all? Or Jays? :O
Update soon
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-06-10
Chapter: 17
Oh no....poor Chester and poor Mike. hope Chester could get over it as soon as possibly.
From: Bennoda_Lover
Date: 2012-06-09
Chapter: 17
Omg I think I cried for the whole ending. Poor Chester no one deserves that
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-06-05
Chapter: 16
OMG keep Chester and his baby safe plz! Mike will be furious to that elf!
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-05-30
Chapter: 16
Hahaha sounds Mike did a good job for his first trainning day. During that tough time, even they did some naugthy thing? hahaha I thought he was not tired at allXDDD
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2012-05-26
Chapter: 15
Poor Jason, I understand him now, about his love for chaz, the strong emotion, and Chaz, always be a kind person, a kind elf, loves him more an more, I'm happy mike at there comfort him, that's warm.
Good chap! Love it! :p
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-05-25
Chapter: 14
poor Jason...i sort of understand Chester's decision. Give a dying person a hope, made him close his eyes peacely...pray for him.
From: DaisyTelly
Date: 2012-05-23
Chapter: 14
I mean...are you serious? what was that?
I don´t get it. Maybe you´ll give us an answer in the next chapter. But honestly, I didn´t like that :S Chester is like a whore.
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-05-23
Chapter: 14
....I dont know what to say. Chester loves Jason too? Okay, in a my-king-way, but I thought there was something wrong. sigh
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2012-05-20
Chapter: 14
oh jason...love kills human, like on him. i feel like he loves chaz more than i think...hummm ><
good chap, wanna read more! :)
From: Bennoda_Lover
Date: 2012-05-18
Chapter: 14
Omg ur back!!! I never saw the authors note so I had no idea what was going on.
Other than that... I'm feeling even more bad for Jayson now
From: DaisyTelly
Date: 2012-05-18
Chapter: 14
I liked that chapter, because it was LONG!!! yes, very good.
hmm...I don´t know what to think about Jason...he became human for Chester? ohman...I hope Chester still loves Mike <3
update soon :)))
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2012-05-15
Chapter: 12
Welcome back:)Chester is cool man here. Jason reminded me of one song, Love Hurts. But not in a proper way, i know.
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From: Vixenla
Date: 2012-06-17
Chapter: 20
Awww no. *giggles*