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The treasure of the heart by vickykun

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From: Vixenla

Date: 2012-06-17

Chapter: 20

Awww no. *giggles*

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-06-16

Chapter: 20

I don't think your stupid. Quite the opposite actually: )

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-06-16

Chapter: 20

I'm sorry i forgot to review the last chapter. Damn i remembered i wrote a review for this, i don't know why i didn't post it. Sorry anyway. I add this.


I'm gald to see they got over it, both of them. I guess they would have a beautifull baby, Mike's baby as soon as possible.

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-06-13

Chapter: 18

So thats the reason why...... I wonder if Ches will tell Mike that the baby wasn't his though and Mike's reacton :l

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-06-12

Chapter: 18

The baby is Jay's? But how? I mean, Jay was not Chester's truly love, right?...how could he make Chester pregnant?

From: DaisyTelly

Date: 2012-06-12

Chapter: 18

Hahaha I knew it !! I thkin it was stupid that Chester slept with Jay like a whore -.- I don´t see why he should do that, and why Mike was okay with it. Anyway I have a feeling that Chester doesn´t love Mike...hmm...in my eyes Chester is cold.


Update soon :)

From: DaisyTelly

Date: 2012-06-10

Chapter: 17

On no !!! Poor Baby :''(

you are so mean !! xPPP

I was wondering if it was Mikes Baby after all? Or Jays? :O

Update soon

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-06-10

Chapter: 17

Oh no....poor Chester and poor Mike. hope Chester could get over it as soon as possibly.

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-06-09

Chapter: 17

Omg I think I cried for the whole ending. Poor Chester no one deserves that

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-06-05

Chapter: 16

OMG keep Chester and his baby safe plz! Mike will be furious to that elf!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-05-30

Chapter: 16

Hahaha sounds Mike did a good job for his first trainning day. During that tough time, even they did some naugthy thing? hahaha I thought he was not tired at allXDDD

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2012-05-26

Chapter: 15

Poor Jason, I understand him now, about his love for chaz, the strong emotion, and Chaz, always be a kind person, a kind elf, loves him more an more, I'm happy mike at there comfort him, that's warm.

Good chap! Love it! :p

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-05-25

Chapter: 14

poor Jason...i sort of understand Chester's decision. Give a dying person a hope, made him close his eyes peacely...pray for him.

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-05-24

Chapter: 14

Nooooooooooooo. Whhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyy????????

From: DaisyTelly

Date: 2012-05-23

Chapter: 14

I mean...are you serious? what was that?

I don´t get it. Maybe you´ll give us an answer in the next chapter. But honestly, I didn´t like that :S Chester is like a whore.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-05-23

Chapter: 14

....I dont know what to say. Chester loves Jason too? Okay, in a my-king-way, but I thought there was something wrong. sigh

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2012-05-20

Chapter: 14

oh jason...love kills human, like on him. i feel like he loves chaz more than i think...hummm ><

good chap, wanna read more! :)

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-05-18

Chapter: 14

Omg ur back!!! I never saw the authors note so I had no idea what was going on.


Other than that... I'm feeling even more bad for Jayson now

From: DaisyTelly

Date: 2012-05-18

Chapter: 14

I liked that chapter, because it was LONG!!! yes, very good.

hmm...I don´t know what to think about Jason...he became human for Chester? ohman...I hope Chester still loves Mike <3


update soon :)))

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-05-15

Chapter: 12

Welcome back:)Chester is cool man here. Jason reminded me of one song, Love Hurts. But not in a proper way, i know.

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