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Love and the Undead by Jacq

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From: nab

Date: 2015-08-11

Chapter: 5

Finally caughtup with this fic. I love the 'drama' going on between Chester and Mike. When will the rest of the guys join? Looking forward to that.


Welcome back.

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2015-08-10

Chapter: 5

You are back! I am very happy. Welcome back!

I have never read this story but I've read all your other stories, you say you write a new chapter of "Make a wish" and I'm so happy !! I loved that story!

I hope you like LPF and you're all right with us. Please stay with us again!

From: wz

Date: 2015-08-09

Chapter: 5

Am I dreaming or did your name really reappear again? Holy butt. It's been so long, you probably don't remember many from this site. I'm happy to see another author come back, such a surprise this year. Welcome once more and hopefully you'll stay for as long as possible!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2015-08-09

Chapter: 5

You have no idea the shock I felt yesterday when you showed up on Twitter asking about LPF XD it was like, "No way!" hahaha especially since I just came back here a month or so ago myself. So happy you've come back to write for us. You write so well, and so crisp and it's a feather in LPF's hat.


This story, I skimmed through the old chapters and surprisingly, I remembered most of it! I think the most interesting thing about the new chapter is Mike's internal struggle with "forgetting" or "betraying" his wife/old life. I think a lot of people who lose a life partner deal with that. How long should you wait before moving on? It's a huge question - one of those subjects that deals with the psychology of the heart.


Chester was great about it though, being understanding and offering Mike all the time he needed to deal with his past and that he'd be waiting when Mike finally got to that place. hahaha of course Mike jumped right in XD but I have a feeling that might come back to haunt him with guilt or maybe even regret.


How's the saying go? We take the shadows of our past lovers into every relationship we enter. Something like that lol I think I just fancified it, but the sentiment is the same.


I used to live in Ft. Morgan! And Nebraska :) Just saying. It sucks that they have to move camp so much. I get why, but it still sucks. Especially when you find a place with a good set up, as the one girl said.


I hope Mike will decide to stay with the group. How could he not? Maybe because of guilt. His guilt could make him leave them for a bit, but his need for Chester could drive him back.


I'm just rambling now.


Ok, again, so happy to see you back here! *hugs*

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2012-06-10

Chapter: 4

such a COOL story! super story! XD i mean i read it, and i can watch it in my brain, like movie, in 3D~

and those two guys! chaz and mike! SO HOT man, the 'cover with bleed' feeling...humm XD thats wild and sexy~


cant wait to read more!! :D AMAZING work!

From: DaisyTelly

Date: 2012-06-07

Chapter: 4

Oh fuck yess

I love this Story so much!! It´s simply great. The plot is wonderful and the characters are wonderful too <333

please update soon and don´t wait so long again. I think I have a new addiction ;)


many greets Estelle

From: Z

Date: 2012-06-05

Chapter: 4

just started reading this, and....

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I love it! I like how you give every chatacter anf scenery its fair share of description.

Your story is simply addicting, bennoda with weapons and zombies *sigh*...pure heaven

oh, just one question. How come chester refused using a gun when the 4 walkers came?

Anyways, continue with this awesomness, i cant wait for the next update! <3

From: MentalRap1st

Date: 2012-06-05

Chapter: 4

Hello~

I read all those chapters and really fell in love with it~!

Just go on~

From: Anastacia

Date: 2012-06-05

Chapter: 4

First of all what i wanted to say is that your banner is badass!Did you made it? As a photoshop'er i gotta say that i just love it!Second, i am so happy that my last review made you laugh, that was my point actually, and i am glad that my mission was completed;D


Ok, the actual story, that dialogue between Shelby and Chester cracked me out, i mean, she seems so curious about the fact that her brother actually (can i say it?) seduced Mike xD I knooooow that it was his point, wasnt it?lol Okay, what else the zombies...ugh, love such moment's here, and im sure M and C looks sooo hot while they hunt/kill those bastards (lol yeah, i am that weird that i have such a fantasy) AND THE ACTUAL KISS...what can i say, it wasn't just a peck like last time, it was a make out session LOL it felt like they'll have sex right away, i swear "evil laugh" And what cracked me out even more that Mike had to actually stop it or he would cum (THATS what Chester can do with a straight guys xD) Anyways, im just happy that Mike didnt denied it, i mean that he feels for Chester, and thats really great. So, we'll see how their relationships would go,right?;) Okay, i just loved the chapter as you can see, and please keep it going like that, AND im craving for faster updates!

From: Maiferu

Date: 2012-06-03

Chapter: ?

This was the first thing I read as I woke up this morning; oh well, actually, the first thing I read was your announcement on Twitter; after that, I flew straight up here internally singing and shouting "hooray"s (just internally, cuz I was, and still am, sick as a pig and I was too weak to even breathe...which brings me to a cute story: I was so weak I couldn't even breathe and stand upright, so I was majorly fearing the point where I would get to that beautiful kissy scene you mentioned would happen in this chapter; I was like "oh my god I'm gonna feel soooo bad when I get there cuz my illness won't be able to bear my awakened hormones"...but when I got there, that holy scene made me feel the exact opposite! For some minutes, I felt like I was in heaven, stomachache faded and my head felt light and and aaand, oh god. But, let's get back to the review).

The first thing I actually noticed when I got here was that we're only on the 3rd chapter of this story, and wow, I felt like we were a loooot further than that; which takes us to two realizations: 1. You seriously need to update more often because the gap between the first time you posted the story and the last chapter you updated is too long to be filled by ONLY THREE chapters; 2. You seriously need to realize how awesome you are, having had me hooked like bait since the very first line, and getting me more and more addicted with each chapter passing. Really, this is truly amazing. And don't you ever dare apologize for your details again; I'm telling you, as soon as you finish posting it here and give us plenty of bennoda action (hehehe) you can consider publishing it as a real book, without any problem. I'd be your no. 1 fan and give you my best support to turn it into a movie, because it really deserves. I love ALL the details, and the great attention you give to the background. My favorite parts - apart from what we all know and I won't mention cuz you'd think me to be pathetic, lol - are the zombie-killing scenes. They really deserve some heavy kudos here. If I read this story without knowing you, I would think you're some kind of horror movie director or something. So accurate.

And then, really, the whole setting is just so captivating. I love you constantly taking the action to the woods; that is undoubtedly my all time favorite setting. And, well, danger makes everything brighter.

And then, that beautiful scene...it was so perfect in every single way. I mean it, one of the most beautiful kiss scenes ever. So delicate and perfect in its details. Urgh. Love it. I hope every single chapter will be this beautiful, from now on.

Speaking of which, I really hope your next updates will be quick. I'm afraid to say I don't even care about your other stories anymore, lol, I love this one too much. This is definitely my favorite story of yours, and one of my favorite stories ever on here. And maybe even in general. And I just needed to write this review, so you know how great of an author you are, despite the fact that I don't write reviews in here anymore. ("But yoouuuuu, aaaree, the only exceptioooonn...")

Really, please, make sure this story will keep on living till it's complete.

Love you Jacq :) Hope to hear from you soon.


Actually, I got one thing to give you. As soon as you can, contact me so I can show you :)

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2012-06-03

Chapter: ?

Awwww. I fell in love with this chap:D. I love how they confessed to each other and of course the make out scene:3


Update soon: )

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-06-02

Chapter: ?

Awww so glad to see u add this to your update list! They are really man when they killed walkers to prevent them from their companies. And also so hot their second kiss, and more than that, they confessed to each other. Let this happen and see where they will go.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2012-04-18

Chapter: ?

Ooh Bennda kiss! I loved this! <3

From: Anastacia

Date: 2012-04-12

Chapter: ?

Holy shit,girl, you surprise me all over again. You and your writing skills, im already so into this story, plus, i love zombies lol and i think your story is very unique, makes me want to say :Oh my gosh, i want more!"Ive read all the 3 chapters just today, and i fucking loved it!Even if its 4.08 am here, and imma fucking sleepy, i couldnt just leave it without the review,coz it was so worth it!(tho im sorry if my review is cracked up lol) What can i say about this chapter, just WOW,you remember how we once talked on twitter about the Love from the first sight? Thats what it is between Mike and Chester, i mean LOL it seems like they want each other since the minute they've met. (Mike and Chester's story about loosing their loved ones is very sad, but... maybe it was their destiny to meet each other and fall in love?Plus, it was mentioned that Mike didnt even wanted his wife, like he wants Chester and im like" Who doesnt,huh?xD") Plus i was a bit surprised that Chester is actually gay. The kiss...awn,that was so nnocent,like for real, that was the cutest thing in this chapter, and i already craving for more lovin'!Ahhhh, i love this story!Give us more,pretty please?

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-04-12

Chapter: ?

AWWWWW I missed this update! I'm sorry. That kiss was so beautiful and I like your last sentence "The dam had been broken. "

From: Grey Daze

Date: 2011-12-13

Chapter: ?

Yay! Chester! *claps*

I love how you made most of them related. it adds well to the complexity of the story :D

This reminds me of several things. The Walking Dead, Resident Evil, and Cell. All of which I <3 =D

The hatchet was a nice touch. Mikey's a badass lol!

Please update soon:)

From: Vixenla

Date: 2011-12-13

Chapter: ?

Glad to see Mike finally found some people. Hope they all survive that nightmare!

From: PhoenixFarrell

Date: 2011-12-12

Chapter: ?

Again, great chapter!! Update soon!!! This is getting very interesting. I think making yourself a zombie is kind of neat, haha. I was going to write a zombie story using LP and a few other people of course. I had this idea about a month ago and still haven't had time to do it. It was more based after 'Dawn of the Dead'. I'm glad I finally get to see a zombie story though!!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-12-11

Chapter: ?

Hmmm interesting! ;) I like this story so far.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2011-12-11

Chapter: ?

Oh my godness! you have no idea how much I love this background, yes I am a "the walking dead" huge fan! I almost scream when I saw this fic!


And the like-to-be-alone man, Mike, with a rifle and the cautious blonde, Chester with a crossbow. THAT'S DAMN HOTTTT! I really love the personalities you gave them. hmmm that was so attractive!


And Mike,oh dear, he got some itching feeling when he lied on Chester at the first place. Hmmm he must be lonely too long*winks* But i cannot blame it on him. Look at Chester, he even weared a pretty belt with nails in such horrible condition, what can I say! He was such fashional hottttt baby!Hahahahaha!


Cant wait to see the next chapter!!!

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