Oooo sexy and mysterious and funny and scary. Best combinations EVER hahaha! Wonderful job!

loved it! =D *drools* soooo hot! i absolutely love sex and mirrors. i think it's the best combination ever! Everything about this was so perfect, Shanny! *wipes drool off chin* I want more please! =D

Jacquie <333

whoaaaaaa!!!! XDD i LOVE this sooooo much!!! im horny now too! muhahaha XDD this such a HOT HOT HOT fic! in the night, in the carnival, in the mazes of mirrors! XD thats such a amazing idea first~ XP this so much sexy feeling at there, a kinda horror scene, and the little game XDD and i like that the scare back on chaz~~~ mike eat the yummy 'cheese' there! thats so GREAT!

so naughty guys! XPPP they got the win-win XD this is a brilliant game~

AMAZING story! LOVE it sooooooo much! must add fav and fate! :D you always great!

Wow awesome game! It's kind of naughty that their first love made at a carnival! XD

Chester and his little games! lol It's obvious he was horny for Mike. I liked the way Mike kept getting lost and crying about it after wards. haha Having Chester be able to see the maze from his spot was brilliant! And I absolutely LOVE when Chester called himself the "cheese" LOL Dammmmmmmmn. The sex. Oh man that was amazing. I couldn't believe they both wanted it so bad. After all of Chester's little game and Mike's "I'm gonna kill you"s I thought they would be a little more harsh with each other. But they weren't. That's a good thing! Congrats on an awesome story!

Damn. Damndamndamndamndamn. This story....Ah, Shan, this story. Oh well, no, not just this story, every single story you write. It's just....awesomeness at its finest. Ah.

I....god, I don't even know what to say. Thank you?

You just gave me what I wanted, lol. I was disappointed by the lack of "you know what" (not gonna say that out loud cuz I don't want the others to be angry at me, lol) on this site, and you...you healed me <3 now I'm not desperate anymore and I have something new to drool over, lol!

This was just so hot. But also, so passionate. I could feel their emotions, which became my emotions too. I could feel myself being drawn into almost yelling at Mike to go left instead of right, or pushing Chester out of his hideaway to come into Mike's arms....but I didn't actually have to. In the end, everything became just so right. And I'm rambling now, I'm sorry, I've got a lot of things I want to tell you in my mind but I can't pull them out cuz your awesomeness misted them all up!!

I loved the kiss in the end. LOVED it. And not just because it was sexy, but because the situation, and the way you made it happen...was magic. Just loved it.

And you know the whole feeling, about not being here writing if it wasn't for you, is perfectly mutual. You're the first person I met on this site, the first person I'd have to thank if I am where I am right now. I love you, Shan. You're amazing, never forget it. Never let ANYONE tell you any different.

Hey Shanny,thats @TequilaKilla and my first review to your story.OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAZING!You are such a great writer.I love Chester in this story and his meany teasy side HA!I laughed when he said smtg like:Come and get the cheese.Adorable jerk xD And i totally LOVE their game,and how Mike freaked out about it xD And sure the sex scene was hot as hell,yeah:D i LOVE ur stories,and i promise im going to review them now!