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Keep up with me as we lose control by Maiferu

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From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-08-17

Chapter: ?

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwAWWW!!!!!

this soooooo damn hot!!! the you...yus the 'you kno who' guy LOL! just like a hunter!!! and i LOVE this feeling! the little wild cat chaz!!! awww im horny now!!!!! =O= i wanna eat him too LOL


aw the scene just sexy, and what they did at there is sexy too! fight...then...sex XD hahaha HOT things of guys! (well of course girls do this is SEXY too LOL) i just so love the wild and eager feeling between them, and the kinda rough action...oh yeah...the hurt is so sweet there~

and the last part! great! he know chazs name now and i believe like what he said at there, chaz boy can’t escape anymore! >:DDD


amazing work! LOVE it sooooo much! must add fav and rate! :D

From: Remy

Date: 2011-08-17

Chapter: ?

LOL and it all started with Chester sitting on Mike's sofa. :P

BTW, I liked this! You were right, it isn't "explicit"! Sorry, but some of that stuff just disturbs me sometimes, if you know what I mean :P

You rock! And I loved how "you" found out his name:P

I guess I'm not the only one who imagined Mike XD Everyone did.

Haha, we're all obsessed. XD

-Peace

From: x_new-dividex

Date: 2011-08-16

Chapter: ?

I'm speechless! A story has NEVER done that to me!!

Fuck me that was hot! Hotter then the idea we origionally discussed! I can't listen to 'Gimmie More' without this story blowing through my mind!!!

Even without the use of names, I knew EXACTLY who they were, but it made it even hotter!

Just wow.. That is amazingly written, I've favoured it and rated it, but jeez.. Are you sure English isn't your first language?! :o you write it better then I do!!

But again, well written.

Short, hot, sexy, Britney Spears!!!!!

Just.. Well written!

I can't express how good this is without blabbing too much!! <3

From: kate

Date: 2011-08-16

Chapter: ?

wooow... O_O

well I think your mission to make this hot worked out! :D

I like the idea of Mike being the one who snorted cocaine instead of Chester, like in most stories. and the answering machine thingy... I LOVED IT ;D Idk why... just the part that Chester thought he should have said his name earlier... and the way he smirks about Mike finally knowing his name... just that little 'game' <3 ME LIKEY :D


<3

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-08-16

Chapter: ?

Ohhh that was sexy ;) I liked this! Hehe

From: Jacq

Date: 2011-08-16

Chapter: ?

sooo hot, Fede! like holy shinoda! lol. incredible standalone, hun. really truly incredible!


Jacquie <3 <3

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2011-08-16

Chapter: ?

I not only rated this story, but I added it to my favorites as well. This.. just wow. You made this for me??? I'm in tears!! Listening to the song while reading added this extra sex appeal to it and -- of course -- I was imagining it being M/C. Just so wickedly hot!! You've really outdone yourself with this one, my love. This is AMAZING! The fight added this desire, this crave and then when they took it back to Chester's house... *shivers* way too hot for words!!! I love when "You" -- Mike in my mind -- learned Chester's name. He repeated in his head; that was BRILLIANT. Simply amazing, darling. Thank you so much for this! It has made these rough days seem long gone =] *hugs you tightly*

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