AGGGGHHH. The sex in here is amazzzing. Someone needs to write a Delnoda mpreg fic for me! With mommy Mike :)

Mmmmmmm... That was good. They're so horny. I mean damn, mike gave Brad a blowjob at 3 am! LOL that was hot and sexy and I can't wait for more!

Holy shit. I love this story so much! I love Mike and Brad. Delnoda is just the best! I love that they got married! I love how badly they want each other. It's so hot, cute, and dirty. When the tragedy comes, I'll stop reading. Bye <3

Lawl, don't give yourself an ulcer. Twisted romance is sometimes better than gushy romance (besides, you don't have THAT many more chapters... just... like... five. :33 Although I love the gushy (and the fact that Mike and Brad basically defiled their entire house over and over again. I mean, damn, they did it in the bath, the porch, the yard, the floor, the fucking refrigerator, the roof, sideways in the chimney...) but I can't wait for the erred-up stuff.

Also, I apologise for being a horrid reviewer, but I shall certainly try to be awesome pawsome, just for you. :33

Aw, no.

Well, that's gonna suck. But I liked this. Haha, Brad is such a pushover, going along with whatever Mike says. That's sweet. So much sex. Dayyyyyum. I can't believe that. But it was so fucking hilarious and hot when Brad explained all the places. XD

This story is so cute, mushy, sappy, lovey-dovey, and adorable! And well I don't care if you don't like it, because I do. I know this isn't your thing, but you write it well. I love the way Mike was scared and nervous, but you made Brad secure and assuring. They are so sweet together, and that last paragraph was perfect! I love Mike, and I love Brad! I love Delnoda, and this story rocks. So continue it, without having one of them cheat or lie or hurt the other, or any other crap! Because I love it the way it is! :)

this story actually made me like delnoda. which is weird co coz for some reason I hate Brad. But it does make sense that they would get togeather because they have been friends for ever. anyways....please continue cos it's a great story.

This was so cute. I like how used the line "stole my thunder" that was funny. That rainbow was beautiful touch. Brad was so sweet to think of Mike like that because that ring must look incredible! Then Mikey stole his thunder. It was nice though, then Brad proposed, and it was all great and happy! So so happy, whether you like it or not. hahaha Update soon. :)

Okay, okay, I've only RECENTLY gone completely gaga over good Delnoda, and I don't know why I have read this before. (The word "Delnoda" should have dragged me in, I wonder why it didn't...) Anywho, this is awesomesauce! Although, personally, I can't imagine Mike being a bottom (Brad is just so wittle and cute) but it's still hot like this. The two of them together... -implosion- Bravo!

Uh, I'm sorry about you and your girlfriend. Haha. I'm glad you still want to finish it up. That's dedication right there! lol

I fucking loved this chapter, okay? So much cuddly and hot sex. If you ask me, cuddly and hot is the best kind of sex. Mike! He was so fucking amazing at the start. Desperate, begging, and pleading Mike. *_* So. Good.

Ah man! That flashback! lol But they were fucking since grade school? I think it's sweet how Brad got Mike's virginity. ;) It was definitely adorable when Brad got back to real life. He zooned out and started thinking about sex, during sex, and that is just pure brilliance. Ah fuck. That last part when they came. So. Fucking. Sexy. Loved it! :D

Okay, I seriously do NOT understand why I am the only person reviewing this story! It's the best! I really hope you don't stop writing on it. I'm serious, if no one else reviews, I still want you to continue, for me and for your girlfriend :D This was... great. There's so much emotion. I feel sorry for Mike. This must be terrible, but he does have Brad! And that is, should, be enough. SO MUCH SEX! OMD. I love it. Mike mumbling at the end, haha, so funny! And everything here was great. Awesome job! Update soon! :D

Okay, first off is I LOVE Delnoda it's my favorite pairing. They're just so good together. In fact, I squealed a little inside when I saw it was a chapter Delnoda story. You never see many those, and I've really wanted to write my own, but I stick to Bennoda since more people like it. ANYWAYS. This one is no different. I LOVE IT. The sentence when Brad said "I was aware how in love I was" just melted me. I'm writing this on the floor as a puddle. They're just so sweet to each other. I'm glad you've finally made something happy, that I can read. Not that I mind the sex. I don't read smut, and most of your stuff is smut. But yay, happy Delnoda! Almost like a dream come true. I'm talking a lot. Anyways, happy birthday to your girlfriend! :) And update as soon as you can.