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From: wz

Date: 2014-07-04

Chapter: 1

Oh crap I keep reading it and dying inside Lool

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2011-06-17

Chapter: 1

I loved this. Mike is so dominating and vicious *growls* I'd definitely like a piece of that ^_~ I nearly spit out my coffee when I read that passerbys could SEE them fucking each other. I think I'd love a job where I could see Mike and Chester screwing each other. Yep, I'd be happy with that.


I don't see too many standalones anymore, so I'm very very pleased with this story! It was exactly what I needed =] and... I think my headache is down to a dull throb now... so your story was my cure! *yay* Thanks :)


<3 Shanny

From: vickykun

Date: 2011-06-14

Chapter: 1

uh naughty stuff

Me likey *-*


It was hot hot hot

From: iamnobody

Date: 2011-06-14

Chapter: 1

Mommy... that was tasty!!! You described everything so well! Especially the part with the name sign. I swear to god, if I were in Chester's position, I would totally do that, and have no shame ;D

From: Maiferu

Date: 2011-06-14

Chapter: 1

Damn, I guess I have to agree with Wu and look for a tissue to stop my nose from bleeding, lol. That was so amazingly written and (I know you already know what I'm about to say) HOT!!!!

Truth to be told, I'm a bit lazy on slash scenes lately, mostly because they're almost all alike, and I don't enjoy reading them like I did before...but, hell yeah, I DID enjoy reading this one!!! The whole thing going on with Mike's silver name sign was so fucking sexy, and the fact that they did everything while being watched made it all the more...uhm...daring? lol

I also love how, in the end, even after that Brad thing, Mike and Chester fell into each other's arms like two old lover. No more slaves and such. So sweet, so perfect. T.T You should write more girl!!!!!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2011-06-14

Chapter: 1

=TT=.......im nosebleed now! nosebleed serious!

whoa...this is so dirty, dirty HOT lol~ and i love this so much! Mike fxxk Chaz against the glass wall and let other gus watch him aww thats sooo...HOT! im so like mike be the boss and chaz be his...little sex slave muhaha XD aww thats so damn HOT thing!

really amazing wotk! must add fav and Rate~ :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2011-06-14

Chapter: 1

Mmm nomnomnom I loved this ;)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2011-06-13

Chapter: 1

omg I thought I was almost bleeding nose when I read it. Licking his surperior's name sign? Chetser you naughty sult!The glass wall scene was so damn hottt! Mike you dirty boss! But I love them like that!LoL

Did Brad see them? oh believe me, you should continue it!

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