Welcome welcome!! You will never be able to leave this site now lol I think you did an awesome job for your first story and the language conversion was really really good. Normally thats not the case... But you did a great job! I loved the atmosphere of this story... And I also think mike would be the one freaking out but I liked chesters part in the story! The end was sweet and sexy :) great great job!!

In reality, I think Ches would be the calm one and Mike would be the one spazzing out, but I loved this story! I wasn't expecting what I read from the rating... it definitely wasn't a 'G' rated story! lol. Welcome, btw! We definitely need more skilled writers and from this story I see that you have just that -- amazing talent! I hope to see another story of yours soon.

<3 Shanny

Oh God that was SO CUTE. It was SO realistic how Mike was super calm and Chester was all freaking out. Amazing!

The ending was just fucking perfect. I just couldn'tiusdhvdgiuvdaiuvadugivda ohmygod. Good job!

Great fic!

think i really love it! :D

i love the way how chaz ashamed there, naked in front of mike LOL i like see him blush! thats the cuttest thing! and all his panic about the last night just make me giggle much! XD and mike at there just so cool! sweet and cool at same time! i really like the way you describe them! and this morning :D and so happy they kiss again, and chaz kiss back, yus, that mean he need this too, enjoy it when you both sober XD

'Chester snatched his boxers out of Mike’s hand.' this scene epic! LOL~

AMAZING work! :3 wanna see more from you!~

well, I knew this story in German already, but I have to review again ... just because you deserve it hun :)

btw. my English is ... uhm ... well, not really good ^^ but I'll try

first of all: I love it

I love your style, I love the atmosphere ... I love the way you define the chars ... oh yeah I enjoyed reading so much, really ... in English it's even better than in German, I think ... It feels like ... more emotional, yeah ... it feels ... realer? more real? ^^

I love the way Chester is ashamed because he's naked ... I mean, they did it the night before ... it's just funny to read ^^

--> “Tell me… how can you take that so easy? … See we have … we have… we did… urgh,” Chester started rumbling as he was back again with Mike. He curled up his face and paced across the room.

--- it isn't "urgh" Chaz -.- ... sry, I had to ^^

--> “Come on, let’s find it out.” Mike asked him while he positioned one warm hand on Chester’s cheek. Caressing him gently with his thumb. The singer tensed immediately under Mikes touch but the emcee was undeterred. He smiled softly as he slowly bent over to his ‘best friend’. The rapper looked back and forth between Chester’s beautiful curved lips and his wonderful shinning eyes. He paid attention to every little negative reaction, but nothing happened.

--- honestly, this part makes me ... woah ... really, I won't find words for the feeling, but I was just ... Mike's words made me shiver ...

he' right ... the ending proves it ^^ ... and I'm happy Chaz kisses Mikey back ... I'm happy they enjoy it

really, a wonderful OS ... like everything you write, actually ^^ ...

I'm happy you've uplouded it :D ...