The beginning of the first chapter almost made me cry! Its so sad under what circumstances Mike enters the world!

Well..Chester's life isnt easier, but in the second chap I really felt the urge to hit him. How could he know what Brad was doing to Mike and not do anything about it! *kicks his sexy ass*

I can totally understand Brian!

And WOW! Your writing style got even better from Saviour to this one here! Its really great and I hope u will have time to update again soon! can't wait for more!!

*huggles tightly and gives Bennoda cookies*

Oh dear God. Chester seems so positively...evil. Gah I don't like Chester like this. It seems like it should be a story about Mike and Brian not Mike and Chester. Very well written chapter though. Hope...life goes well for you, hugs & milk & bennoda cookies for you. Update ASAP please! :)

OMG, I absolutely LOVE, LOVE LOVE Saviour, so I know I'm going to love this as well. I can see the similarities between the two, but I definitely can see the differences as well. I really, really enjoy your writing style and thought the first chapter was very, very artistic. I loved the words that captured the birth of Mike and the downfall of Chester. I already love how this is progressing and although I'll miss Saviour, I'm excited for the .. launch... of this story. It is already so captivating and I can't wait for you to update. I understand slow updates aren't planned and life often times gets in the way, so take your time! But I can't wait for the next installment. Chester's attitude is very different in this one.. towards Mike and I'm so interested in seeing this progress and how these two come together.

I LOVE it!! = ) Awesome job.. as always!

love it! I like the whole setting especially chester's "i dont give a fuck"attitude and his bro being involved in the story. I really hope Brian is one of the main characters. Can't wait for the next chapterXD

I'm liking this story so far. Can't believe Brad is an abusive lover :( I hope Chester stops with the attitude! He's so prissy >.> I'm very eager for the next chapter! I really like Brian in this story; he's the cool, collected, mature one :)

Oh site :o cliffhanger! Chester is such a jackass!

ok... i am super curious lol. update soon plz!!! My bday is February 11th too =)

Aww, I'm still kinda sad that you're not updating Saviour any more. But hey, maybe this go around (story) will be even better. It does look very promising. Great first chap! Update soon hun. :)

Wow, this one is so interesting! I love the idea, and I love how you wrote the whole thing. You're so good, dude ^^

I couldn't expect Brian to be the one in danger. You know, you said Chester was the one to be saved, so it was a little unexpectable for Brian to be the one being lifted up by strong and gentle arms, lol - if I even understood well whose arms are that XD - but, you know, is the good-surprise-kind-of-thing. So, I can't wait for more :) update soon!

whoa O-O who is the man has the strong, but gentle hands? is that mike? the one who bron to save chazs life? well, i wanna read more, seems chazs life really bad, and descend, he need someone to save him from this marsh...

good start! waiting for the next! :D

I like this story! I like it a lot ;D

Please update :P

Awww I really liked "Savior" but I'm excited to see where this one goes. Hopefully they can save eachother.

ohhh interesting! I like it so far! Keep up the wonderful job! :D

Oooh this is so interesting already! I wanna know what happens to Brian lol

And when Mike meets Chester >3<