Oooh! Update soon pweeze!

And make Chester see Mike again, and let him stop being such a bitch lolol

I just love this chapter ^^ I love how is it being told by Chester at the end of the chapter ^^ I like this idea :)

Awww! Poor Chester and having to live through this and was Mike there when Chester was being beaten up? Is that why he wanted to help him and gave him money? ^^ Then I guess poor Mike for living with the guilt then :'(

Love, love your writing and this idea :) and I'm glad to see you going with the version you love to write :) It's important to love what you're writing ^^

Curious?? Yep, you got me curious to see what you have in mind for it :)

Love, Reem :)

I love the first chapter! Poor Chester living in the streets. I liked how you jumped from him being 19 to 30 and it made me curious as to see what happened :D About Mike too! Wanna see what he had to do with the story and with Chester!!

I love it, and I'm off to read the next chapter :D

Uhuhu, all the good love stories start with a little bit of struggling. Well, their one wasn't physical, but I could feel the tension between them...and I liked it!! I can't wait to know what happens next, and I can't wait to actually get to the point, if you know what I mean :D....no, seriously, I really like this story, you have me on your faithful readers' list :) Update soon!

I love the originality of this story. It's almost like a fairytale =D With someone narrating the story in the beginning and it continuing in the story's point of view..

I really like the whole rich kid/homeless kid plot! I can't wait to see where this story is going! I can understand why Chester was being so hostile towards Mike, but I'm hoping he'll give him a chance! =] UPDATE SOON!

wow,what a beautiful chapter...this story is really starting to grow in me :)

great update! i LOVE this chap so much!

the way you describe is so well, let us see about chaz and his live, he must be care everytime, and i love his dog~

and their first meet! awww its so...its a so attractive meeting, i mean, its very interesting to see their different, and how uneasy chaz is XD obvious chaz cant trust this stranger kid, even he 'seems' very nice~ anyways, these definitely make me wanna see what will happen if they meet again!

great work! i LOVE it! waiting for your update! :D

OMG, THEY MET EACHOTHER, YAAAY <3 although not in a good way, oh jesus christ ._. Ches just has to thrust in Mike, give them time, besides Mikes attitude was so sweet, he wasnt judging him in any way, Ches just have to see that, hehe. (dunno if that made any sense ._.)

Anyways XD, Lauren I agree with Bekka, your writing evolved in such a gorgeous manner, seriously, you're definitly improving in your descriptions :) (not that your previous writing sucked, of course !) Im soo hooked up to this story, its perfect, pleaseee I want so much more :D

UPDATE, RAPIDISSIMOO ^^

Aw, I understand why ches is annoyed but he should have talked to Mikey :(

Ps you are growing sooooo much in your writing :') *proud tear* I can still remember when ur stories were like every line was a separate sentence [and not that I didn't love ur writing back then] but it's so amazing to see you grow xxxxxxx

Omg Lauren!!! Please please update!!! I wanna know about the rich man who loved the poor man ;_; is it true? Dos mike still carry a torch for ches? Will he save him and them get back together?????!!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeeee please please please tell us and update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very interesting start! different! i love it! :D

wanna read more, to see what about the story between before 14 years~ :3

oooooooooooooh so chester and mike have history together!!!!!! o.o

Oh hun, that was beautiful. <3 the descriptions, the innocence of a twelve year old, the simplicity of Chester, its so dramatic, I loved it. Please, continue, Ill promise Ill be a faithful reader to this masterpiece, gorgeous, really. ^^

Oh, really interesting! The descriptions you gave were really cute, I could totally imagine the setting, and I really like your writing. Then, I like the plot as you're starting to define it and I can't wait to read more :) Update soon, I'm sure this will be a great story!!

Eep! Very interesting start! Can't wait for the next part!