Reviews
Poison Candy by BourdonGirl
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2011-02-10
Chapter: 4
awww this chap so sweet! >< chaz sleep in mikes arms...thats so warm >< love it!
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2011-01-12
Chapter: 3
awwwww poor chaz! >< is he better now? i hope mike can help him. and the way is very sweet mike comfort chaz there~
good chap, wanna read what will happen so much!~ :D
From: Starsmile
Date: 2011-01-12
Chapter: 3
Awh poor Chester! :(
Can't wait for the what happens next
Love this fic ^.^
From: Maiferu
Date: 2010-12-20
Chapter: 2
Ahhhh I love this story. It's so hot and fluffy and you didn't fall in banalities as many writers could when it's about bennoda. I like it and I can't wait for more!!! The first chapter was so long, and this was so short!! I hope the next chapter will be longer and I hope there will be more slash, you are so good at it :D I'm rating this story!! Love LOVE it.
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2010-12-20
Chapter: 2
this chap sweet!! yus XD all sweet and yummy! XD
i totally dont mind if inside chaz is a fluffy marshmallow, thats him maybe XDD hahaha i love it, a diva marshmallow good too LOL, love that they stay in the room alone, maybe for 24 hours? that will be good, sound very comfortable. awww they are just so cute! >Q<
love the day! love them and this chap! amazing work! :D
From: NoxLP
Date: 2010-12-19
Chapter: 1
only one word to say: HOT!
This was amazing! I want more! xD *sucker for hot bennoda sex*
From: PaperWulf
Date: 2010-12-18
Chapter: 1
That was way too intense for me to actually put into words XD My body hurt just reading this story! lol! But I definitely wouldn't complain if I was with Chester who had a magical boner. I would brave the soreness like Mike did and I would lap at his porno sex act ;D
From: Maiferu
Date: 2010-12-17
Chapter: 1
and, god, I forgot to tell I ADORE your writing!!! God, write more, PLEAAAAASEEEE!!!!
From: Maiferu
Date: 2010-12-17
Chapter: 1
Oh my god that was CRAZY!!!! XD could that be humanly possible???? God, it took so much for me to read it whole and at the end I think I was as exhausted as them for all that turning on and excitement!!! XD Very good job, girlie. How much did it take for you to write all that goodness???? so, so, so crazy XD I LOVE it!!!!
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2010-12-17
Chapter: 1
O_O whoaaaaa this so HOT! what a orgy night! tho...they got some pain after LOL. and yeah chaz such a pussy, and mike, i hope he can beenergy like his sixteen XDDDD
i like the way you write, very good work! XD
From: Alice
Date: 2010-12-17
Chapter: 1
You have an unique style of writing and i very much enjoyed your fic, kudos to you.
Though to cast a small word of critique, some of your sentences tended to be somewhat long, which at times made it harder to keep up with all the hot slash, and we don't want that now do we? ;P
You do have a way with words and i hope i'll hear more from you :)
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From: Maiferu
Date: 2011-02-13
Chapter: 4
Compared to the first chapter of this story, this one was a line O.O
Why, why, whyyyyyyy so short??? T.T I adore this story, but I want longer chapters! I'm totally in love with your stile! And I'm glad you're back :) Can't wait for more!