This story is amazing! Very well written and a great story line. Please please please finish this story! I almost started crying when I saw that the last update was in 2011. I'm dying to know if Mike and Chester will be together and if Rose will be ok. Love the story and thank you for posting what you have :)

HUAAAAAAAAAAAA UPDATE PLEASEEE

I love this story, really *-*

will continue??

Please update (L)

OK, let me start off by saying how much I love this story. It utterly amazing !!! I started reading it at 8:00 Sautrday moring and didn't stop untill I read every single word. I haven't peed in like 10 hours (slow reader). You are an astonishing writer, and have an eye for detail which I admire because most storys lack characterizaition. But I see its been a LONG time since the story has been updated, and I am really hoping that you continue the story. Quiet frankly ... you can't just leave me hang'in: Chester's dads back, Tobias knows about Mike and Chester, Rose's illness, Anna at the mall with a guy that sure as hell isn't her husband. I need to know what happens next !!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PPPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE UPDATE !!!!!

oh I loved this story! Spent a week reading it! Lovely and interesting. Kisses from a Russian fan.

This is such a great story, please continue updating!

Hi there Shanny!Gosh,i cant believe that i were such an a idiot,becoz i started to read this story just a week ago,and thats a bummer that i was there since the beginning (Bad,Bad Ana!lol) But let me be honest i FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!First of all i have to say that i ADORE Rosie.She's such a friendly and stunning lady.She doesnt deserve to suffer from cancer (Please,Shanny,let her live!) And she's a great mother for Chester as well.I love Chester and Mike as well.Gosh they already have to admit that they LOVE each other *evil laugh*.Also i adore Joe and Rob,they are such a dorks!!AND I ABSOLUTELY LIKE MOMMA BEAR XD This woman is such a dope person,and i love the way she talks:)Alright what can i say about this chapter?I have to agree with Trixi,i were happy to see them all together,and yeah,Otie can be such a good playmate for Draven xDD But at the end of the chapter,i was kinda shocked..Chester's father is in TOWN?The hell is that?This person made me feel kinda creepy...I hope he wont do anything bad to Rose or C..And i loved how Mike stood up for Chester (LOL He's his guardian angel,huh?) PS:Why the fuck Talinda is with Tobias?he's a jerk,and she's seems a smart lady,and stuff...Cant believe that they are dating!) Alright,update soon,PLEASE!!I SO LOVE THIS STORY.ITS AH-MAZING.

I loved how they all met up and had this... oh hi, Shanny. haha Sorry... anyways I loved how they all met up and had this awesome like, friends/family meet up/dinner/whatever. And I loved how Chester introduced Otis and Draven - those two would make perfekt playmate, just like their daddies *hint, hint, hint*

The appereance of Chester's dad scared me though. I'm getting a really bad vibe out of this and I am almost scared to get to know what will happen next but... PLEASE update soooohooon!!!

Alright, today I feel like reviewing. I just MUST. I owe you that, for always being so awesome to me!!

I think by the end of the chapter my whole Latin vocabulary could fit in my mouth - and that means that my jaws were gone low, REALLY low. So many twists and coincidences going on!!! The beautiful thing was that I could never once guess what was gonna happen!!! I mean, I was expecting everything to happen, but I was never right! And that's amazing, it makes the story all the more interesting.

I don't like Tobias. At all. And I don't like Charles. And I don't like Talinda. Never liked her, since the first time you made her get into the story (remember?), and I haven't changed my idea. I also don't like Anna, but I'm grateful for her being such a bitch, it makes the way clear for Chester and Mike to be together :3

I hate that so many bad things are happening - and are most likely to happen - but that means that the story is not even close to its end, and I LOVE this thought :D Love this story, and I love how clearly dedicated you are to it!! It makes me think about WWB :) I love you Shan!! Hope everyhting's alright, yeah?

>3<It was an intense chapter. I was still holding my heart when I read it.

I hate Chester's daddy. He looked like a creep guy! And Tobi, what things got his mind!But evil I am... I kind of expect some thing bad happen...

ohhhh this drama!! i LOVE DRAMA and i LOVE YOUUUUUU!!!! <333333333333 you are soooooooo sweet and gifted! <3333!

and ohhh everything happened so fast there, all in a day, in a market. now i think, if Anna date with other guy, then mike could be with chaz in a right way, hummm, if they divorce i mean, and Anna is a bitch before so i hope them divorce! XP tho mike seems still want keep his marriage? hummm....

but chaz just so much cute there! the real, happy and sweet chaz! awww XD all in love with mike! and with Draven! he is a good daddy, he could be! <3333 LOVELY!

and Tobias...he just at everywhere and like a moth, errrr >< and why Talinda with him? she is sweet and i hope she will not became to a bad girl after...hummm dont know? but for drama? XDDD

and a party! aw >O< feel there must not 'an innocent little party'! with Tobi, not, no good things ><

but i really love Rob and Joe there! they are happy nuts LOL i love see them!

biside that! What??? Chazs daddy back??! ohhhh O-O even more drama!! he is so suck there! shit i dont like him at all! ewwww! what the fxxk is he doing there? creepy feeling around me >< and will he hurt chaz ot our Great Rose lady??? >< awww!!! cant wait to see more!!

and i love the last scene so much, little Drave try to comfort chaz, thats a so warm scene ><

AMAZING chap!! i LOVE you and your writing soooooooo much!! :D KUDOS!

Poor Chester hopefully

Mike can be a great help with the tough times that are coming... Mike should leave his wife, wait until Chester is 18 and make himself the happiest man in the world! They're great together. (:

Hiiiiiiiiiiii, so I absolutely ADORE this story! :3

but I must point out that it's "vice versa" not "visa verso" >:l idk if you used it that way on purpose.. or? but yeah. sorry! I'm just such a grammar freak lol

but poor chaz cause of his dad :(

caaaan't wait for the next chaaap! c:

Everyone was in this chapter...lol. but it suck that his dad is back

I got so happy when I saw this had been updated! :D

Were to start? Hmmm. Well I'm glad that Mike decided to finally talk to Anna about their failing marriage. Chazy's so cute in this chap, being all excited to see Mike :)

For some weird reason I actually want Anna to be cheating on Mike so it won't be so "Aahh" when she finds out about his husband having an affair with a male teen. I really dislike Anna in this story. She seems so self-centered and selfish. Anyway back to M/C. I thought it was so cute when Mike hold Chazy's hand at the end. Oh and by the way, I'm terrified of Tobias hurtng Talinda! I feel like he's gonna do bad stuff to her and she's really amazing in this story so I'm not happy about that, cause it's obvious that he's using her to get 'even' with Chester but oh well. We'll see. And I really hope that Charles doesn't harm neither Chester nor Rose anymore.

Thanks for a great Chap! <3

Oh damn! Dramaaaa! :o I can't believe the jackass is back! Mike gotta help Chaz and Rose now, can't let the evil dad get too close.

Okay, I did not see that coming O.o What a creep. I really don't have any words about that. I just hope he doesn't hurt Rose or Chester. I will cry if that happens! But go Mike for standing up and telling him to back off. I was all 'Yes! You tell him, Mikey' lol.

What a strange day indeed. All those coincidental meetings with everybody. Why do I get the feeling that Talinda's going to turn into a bitch? Or am I just paranoid? Why in the world is she dating Tobias? I just don't get it! I want an update soon so I won't be so confused anymore! lol.

And the whole thing with Anna and that other man makes me sick. Honestly, if I was Mike, I probably wouldn't have been able to stop myself from storming into that restaurant and ripping her head off. It just makes me so mad. I agree with Brad. Mike just needs to man up and talk to her about ending it. Before shit gets worse and she finds out about what he and Chester did. If that happens, I can't even imagine the shit that will go down. But then again, it makes for really good angst and drama. Wow. I really need another update haha.

And the fact that Chester was so excited to just be with Mike outside of school or the hospital again that he didn't notice how upset Mike was, was completely cute! I was all 'awwwwww! But open your eyes, Chester!' lol.

Gah! This chapter's got me all riled up! lol. For the third time... I want another update! lolol.

Incredible =D

Jacquie <33333333333333

I'm seriously waiting impatiently for chap 18 :D

Oh god I just don't believe I missed your update! I am really glad to see you are still here and keeping on this.

Well I think that mike was sorts of greed. He felt like he cannot leave Anna, while as he cannot be without Chester. But you know it is impossible that he hungs around with them both.

Okay I am a plot sucker and drama greedy. So plz update it more often!

*glares* how could you, Shanny? lol. i can't believe you stopped it there! but i'm sooooooo happy they're reunited!! yay! =D even if there has to be rules *pouts* but i get the feeling that those rules will be difficult not to break ;) those two can't resist each other haha.

And i can't tell you how much i LOVE that Rose is ok with all of this. I love how she got him the sub position so Mike and Chaz can see eachother and that she is so ok with them being in love with eachother. It's so perfect! =D

But there's so much drama that has to happen to get to the happy ending! O.o What is Tobias going to do? I'm nervous haha. and what about Anna? is she cheating on Mike? omgsh so many questions! update please!!! =D

Jacquie <3333333333333333