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10 Years by fruitjuiceuniverse

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From: VampySam

Date: 2010-10-25

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Very sweet, i loved it are you going to carry this on or just leave it as a standalone, it's beautiful as it is don't get me wrong but i'd love to read more =-].

I rated it 10.

peace, love and mike and chaz smitten muffins to you.

xvampysamx

From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-10-16

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that was really sweet. just what i needed right now. thank you! (:

From: swsrd

Date: 2010-10-15

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YEAH! Sweet, love this little piece of story. good job!;)

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-10-15

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"Better late than never,"

yus, this so right!!! i love this sentence. and this story soooooo cute!!! i love the moment, in studio alone with each other, and their kiss, to continue a love from 10 years ago. thats romantic!


Great work~ love it! wanna read more from you~ :D

*add fav~*

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-10-14

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Aw! <3 this story was so cute! :3

From: danfam4e

Date: 2010-10-14

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will u be writing more chapters? i loved it. i hope u continnue

From: holdlife

Date: 2010-10-14

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beautiful :)

From: NaNo

Date: 2010-10-13

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WoW! 10 fucking years! I supposed it is more than 10 years... However, it's sweet, wish them have the courage in reality. Better late than never.

From: ebony_miasma

Date: 2010-10-12

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Very good. I could feel the tension between them both, then comes the discovery. The moment is so sudden and happens before either one can fully process what's going on. I like this a lot. :)

From: lycan

Date: 2010-10-12

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I really liked the way you captured the moment when they first were pressed together in the studio. I also liked the line "You're shaking too", a lot.


You could do with a beta for simple grammar errors, and because I believe asking someone to get a beta without offering your services is lame, I'm offering to help out. I can't do a large volume of beta-ing, but I can for sure do small one-shots like this.


If you want me to look over stories for you with my grammar-comb, send me an e-mail: lycan.arcady @ hotmail.com


-Lycan

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