That was so dark, yet somehow nostalgic. It had me shivering. I would be lying if I said I never thought of ending my life and for whatever reason you were upset enough to feel that way, I'm sorry. This fic was so emotional and felt so real -- perhaps because this was how you felt when you wrote it. I personally believe stories are the best when it's something the author has experienced mainly because it's more real that way; it's easier to imagine. I commend you for sharing your feelings through such a powerful fic. Though it's not technically an LP fic, I definitely imagined Chester throughout this. He seems to just ooze with that kind of negativity considering what he's been through in the past. Such a powerful story. It really was amazing. Rated and put into favorites.

I just hope that whatever made you feel this way that you stay strong :) Remember, you have readers that adore you! I'm glad you turned something negative into something positive -- now this is what I can proudly call art. ::hugs::

<3 Shanny

I love those kind of fics. And that was really good. I just kept blinking against the computer screen after I finished. It gets the biggest rating from me.

Ohh that left me shivering. Poor Chester (because that's who I imagined. Angst goes well with him) So very sad. :'( Well written though. Nice job Al!

Amazing.

I really want to leave the review at that, because this was perfect, flawless. But I can't - The story is just too amazing. I know who I pictured, but the story was intense picturing anyone. I was disappointed in FlashForward too... I don't get how they can cancel a story/show before it has even begun. =( Anyway, your story was fantastic! I loved it - It was so sad, though I knew what was coming, it was still very, very sad. Great job! =) Full of emotion and the way you write is beautiful, the tone of the story was perfect. And everything came together flawlessly!

That was so dark. It's going straight to my fav list. I love dark/ suicidal things. I've never watched that show, but now I wish I did.

I don't know if that's the way things happens in that series but if it's not, Let me tell you that was very creative.

My face is seriously like this O_O. I'm impressed. [10/10]