FUCK CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!! <3

aaaaaaooo. i find this kinda of stories kinda scary >< but i like ur writing.

Totally keep writing . . . This was so fucking good!!! I absolutely LOVE the "love slave" concept! It can be lovely, it can be dark and dramatic ::faints:: so beautifully written. The concept of torturing Mike by cutting him off before his orgasm, I actually wrote that concept in my standalone w/o knowing you had done the same (I swear I didn't copy lol). It was so hot, so sexy! You're a fantastic slash writer!! Please please write more!!!!!!!

<3 Shanny

Chester is an ass. I want to punsh him so badly. poor Mikey *pout*

I felt bad for Mikey when he had to beg for it *punsh Chester*

the plot is very interesting. and I can't wait for the next chap.

the slash is pretty cool. man, you have very good imagintion. *long-distance high five*

see you soon *huge you tightly*

Ahhhhhhh!!!

Hey, I'm so glad you posted it.

I told you it's going to be awesome but I had no idea it would be THAT awesome!!

see, I'm so happy I talked you into writing it.

you're writing the second chap, right?? because I'll hurt you if you aren't!!!

I miss you a lot and I think I'll see you in 2 weeks.

pretty good for your first story! :D I like it so far, please update whenever you can.

Hehe, me again. Forgot to tell u that i'm going to rate it, cause your story totally deserves it! :)

well, yeah, that's all i wanted to say:)

Oh. My. God. What are u talking about? Of course u should, u MUST continue!! ;) is it really ur first story? I mean, it's so amazing, that i feel like u have been writing for years :)

Slash was hot, i guess u described it very good. *wink*

the plot seems very interesting, i really can't wait to find out what will happen next!

And yeah, poor Mike. I guess u perfectly described his feelings.

I feel like killing Chester right now!>[

anyway, great job! Thank u very much for this story, i really enjoyed reading it. So please, update?