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For You by Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

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From: ibehjessi

Date: 2010-08-21

Chapter: 3

Omaigawd. I finally read all three chapters! I swear i got a nosebleed the first two chapters, the third chapter made me melt! So sweet!

From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-08-17

Chapter: 3

haha, awesome. that one was really funny (: i think chester's just generally hormonal all the time. i hope so anyway (:

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-08-08

Chapter: 3

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! THAT WAS SWEET! I LOVE WHEN MIKE TALKS WITH THE BABY! ^3^

lol! dirty chazy and his special chocolates ;]

wooho! PREGNANT WOMEN ARE HOT! :D this chaz woman is hot... although he's a man... lol!

love u! ^3^

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-08-05

Chapter: 3

omg ::dies:: I loved this chapter!! Usually I'm not a fan of male pregnancy fics, but this was just . . . epic lol. I could totally sympathize with the worry, the cravings, the desire to feel beautiful while pregnant. Mike was so tentative and concerned!! Them having sex on the stairs was so hot. I think this is the first fic I've ever read where that's happened. I love the originality in this particular male pregnancy fic. <3 Shanny

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-08-04

Chapter: 3

omg chaz mummy just so naughty, and cute LOL i think live with him is a very funny thing, mike love that, we all saw it XDD

the happy time on bad just so happy! yeah, mike boy dont think too much, your chaz can take care the baby in his tummy, and he need u let him happy~ lol


i love your work soooo much! its make my day!~ :D

From: Strawberry.dear

Date: 2010-08-04

Chapter: 3

Hey Baby,

okay now I have time to write you a review ^.^

First of all... I am blown away.

The story is amazing and god I wanted to squeel so much.

Chester is nothing more than a pregnant woman haha I love him so much and the idea with the chocolate dicks cracked me up - awesome. Where did u get that from huh?

And Mike being totally worried hurting the kid during sex, mah I just wanted to hold him close, kiss his cheek and tell him to fuck Chester hard. Even though their position was a little... like didn't Mike ask Chester to turn, so like he would be on his site? Well when you're pregnant you prefer position like that, or on all fours, simply because it's way easier than the position they did but well that doesn't really matter because you never said how far along Chester is in his pregnancy hehe Just something that went trough my head.


Anyways I love the story and I squeeled and laughed and smiled and the shirt, "Pregnant woman are pretty" was just priceless. Loved it. Mah I even want another chapter ^.^

You did an amazing job, loved it and you just proved again what an amazing writer you are!!!!!!! *________________*

Love you so much and thank you for that story *_*

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-08-03

Chapter: 3

Aw that was so CUTE :3

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-07-30

Chapter: 2

::Dies:: I don't know whether to wish I was Mike or Chester's twin. What's funny is I have an identical twin lol. So... imagine the odd things running through MY mind lol. I would totally eat that Mike and Chester sandwich ;D

From: domMike

Date: 2010-07-30

Chapter: 2

thank you so much hun ç__ç now I know what "sick of arousal" means hahahahaha!


I don't care if it's a double post!! it deserves MOOORE

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-07-29

Chapter: 2

*explodes from the sexyness*

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-07-29

Chapter: 2

OHHHH MY FXXK! LOL this just soooooo DIRTY! XDDD what a hungry bitch, oh two bitches, this twins! muhaha LOL i think mike is very happy live with them, thats double sexy! double diva! XDD

this gave me a really HOT night! great work! XD

From: domMike

Date: 2010-07-29

Chapter: 2

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH ALKJDFHKGVHJAXCBGKVJHAZGCFGKAYUSGF


*is dead*


AAAAAAAAAAARRRRGGHHHHH *dies again*

BBBBHEKKA that's fucking WOW

From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-07-28

Chapter: 2

O: oh my god bekka! i was literally just thinking about writing a threesome standalone between mike, chester and chester's made up twin! and i was even going to call the twin charles! i read this like O: NO WAY!


totally hot, loved it! i think i've got issues but i just LOVE brother on brother stuff!


good to hear about all those updates on their way. well done dear, ou've done it again x

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-07-26

Chapter: 1

Jesus that was hot. Might need a cigarette even though I don't smoke. OMG I busted out laughing when he said "Right THAR!". Very hot. I could definitely learn how to write slash better from you :)

From: deleteme

Date: 2010-07-26

Chapter: 1

tasty.


<3

From: axl adamic

Date: 2010-07-24

Chapter: 1

OMG! That was so hot, damn! I totally loved it, honey *__* Naughty, naughty Chester lol :D Awesome story, really! :-*

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-07-24

Chapter: 1

WHOAAAAA!~~ XDD

this soooooo HOTTTTTTTT LOL! and like i said, chaz need this, he need his mike too long, let him did this crazy thing let a 'stranger' fxxk him, i can see the intense emotion in his heart. if thats not mike this will be sad but that is mike so, its totally happy XDD and when chaz found that, ohhh XDD i cant smile at there! LOVE and warm and oc HOTTT!


the image of chazs feet against the mirror cus space too small and after the sex he collapsed on the toilet just totally let me nosebleed! *faint cuz lost too much blood LOL* AWWWWWWW!! i distinctly love it! >:3


add fav! good work bb! :D

From: Kenji_Shinizzle

Date: 2010-07-24

Chapter: 1

Love it. Love it. Love it. Love it.

That was SO FUCKING HOT! I love you xD

And the bit when he tells Tyler to ask 'Uncle Mikey' was sooooooooooo cute :3

Great job, as usual, hun :)

*huggles*

From: lplover22

Date: 2010-07-23

Chapter: 1

WHOA *fans self* That was HOT!!! Sexy bathroom sex. Wow just wow. Keep writing Bekka!

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-07-23

Chapter: 1

Wow honey! that was really hot! ~.^

i'm rating this already...

please update! wanna read more :D

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