wow that was hot and im a Dom Mike fan ;) XD you're a very talented writer, the descriptions and such are spot on :3

why do i have a feeling that Ches was admitting that altho hed spend time with Mike he wound't give up time sleeping with others?hmm X3 anyhoo please continue xxx

Yay, you updated! =) I really, really love the descriptions that you give, they certainly make the story. I think you did a good job with the sex scene. It wasn't overly drawn out, but that doesn't seem to be your style anyway. The description you gave was perfect and it matched your writing style perfectly. I like the weird thoughts that Mike has.. the lobster thing was pretty funny. This new admittance by Chester caught me off guard and I hope you go on to explain it some more. =) Other than that, the chapter was great! Update soon!

OooOOooh! I can't wait for an update! Chaz is a devilish man that uses his swagger and charm to fall into bed with random people!! But ::gasp:: could it be that he is actually falling for Mike?? I must see the next chapter, darling!!

can't wait for more!

I loved this chapter ;) update when you can plz!

this interesting. i like chaz and mike's charactar at here, seens they are both has their story and there are some subtle reaction between them.

wanna read more~ good work~ :D

GREAT CHP!!!!!

I LIKE IT!!!!!

^^

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

WANNA KMOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!!!!

FUCKING SUSPENSE!!!!!! XD

Mmmmmmmm, smut. I love it.

I love you.

Smut me more baby!!!

I'm glad you took our reviews to heart, it shows that you are a better writer. =) I have already fallen in love with this story and the second chapter has really helped to establish the plot. I am so interested in seeing where this goes and what happens next. I felt the kiss in this chapter was perfect! Very, very sweet! =)I like how Mike can open up to Chester easily, but it's not like "omg your soooo effing hot!" It's much more refined and sophisticated. I want Mike to write that story about himself so you need to update soon so he can find his own romance! Great job!

oh wow really love this already *.* its so romantic and ima huge cheese ball so its right up my street X3 theres something about lawyer chester thats so incredbily sexy and Mike is adorable, i cant wait to see how you continue :3 really enjoy your writing style xx

Oh my god!Love this chapter!First date,first kiss...oh,it's so sweet and romantic :) it seems like Chester knows everything about Mikey.Very interesting and beautifully written! I'm waiting for the next chapter! ;)

i love it!!! i like everything of this story!!! ^^

it was a great chp!

please continue and update soon! wanna know what will happen!! :D

I think you're off to a really great start and this story has alot of potential. I like the different setting of the story, not many people would set their story in Maine but I think you painted a really pretty picture with your backdrop. The plot is definitly there and I like how you deviated from "band life" and made Mike a writer, it gives the story a lot of interest. =)

That being said, there are alot of spelling and grammatical errors. I just wanted to hint on this, cause honestly, spelling can ruin a story and deter other readers from enjoying your work. Especially a story like this that has so much potential and it has such a strong opening chapter. Spelling errors shouldn't marr it. =) Other than that, I enjoyed it. You may want to think about breaking up your paragraphs like a previous review said (though I am guilty of long paragraphs myself!) I loved how you took the time to carefully describe each scene and let your descriptions tell your story.

Nice work!

one typo dear: I think you mean Stephen King if I'm not mistaken, other then that I liked your story :) very interesting start.

One word of advice, readers don't like really long blocks of text, if you can, try to find a way of splitting up the paragraphs into smaller chunks, it would help the readers and make your story look longer.

Anyways, can't wait to see what's going to happen next :) update asap!

~VP

Mike as a loser....I like it. It's new. Continue this, I think it'd be really cool. Your ideas are really original too, nice one!

Interesting plot, I'm waiting for more.