Very hot

Finally, a kinky fanfiction without any nasty abuse :D

Clever plot, and, honestly, I wouldn't mind seeing more chapters of this, if you are planning to do that. This has potential to get very, very interesting ^^

Oh, so you are the Kelly that commented

"omg............." on my fic, I thought you had had an heart attack back there, hope you're fine, but I'm still confused about your opinion on it x)

Thanks to Alex I read this, and thank God I did.

At the beginning my thoughts were like "Someone please just slap Mike. Like, now." he was a cold son of a bitch.

What can I say about this...I f*cking loved it, initially, Mike did annoyed me, but as I got used to it I sort of begun to go with the flow.

Dominant Mike is not my type at all, but I would be lying if I didn't told you how amazing this is, I adored the detailed descriptions, the passion of the moment, and how you (THANK GOD) chose another position other than missionary, because that one grew kinda old :)

Resuming: this is amazing, and I love this (:

Wowzers!!! Omg Kelly!! That was some nom hot smexy bennoda! Almost as good as goat cheese on rosemary flatbread!!! xD

But seriously, that was great! I love me some dom!mike <3 the silk tie handling was also smokin hot!! I think I told you I kept waiting for some scarfing action..guess I'm gonna have to do a one shot ;P But great work bb! Pure <3

OMG that was a really good PWP dude! :D The last line made me laugh XD wonderful job dude. :)

That was hot! I want more! More chapters, more slash, more! Pleeeeeeaaaassseee???????????????!!!!!!!!

AWWWWWW XDD this porno! so damn HOT! i love the way they did that against the office glass wall XD muhaha *dirty smile*

so think that Mr.Shinoda is very satisfied with his new slutty assistant.

AMAZING work! I love it sooooo much! YAY~ >:D

lol, very, very good! =) Very sexy! ... I need a few moments to take this in... =)

Oooh that was so dirty, it was awesome! Mhh slutty Chaz, yeah! I really loves that, Kelly. Goood job, ya great <3

Ohhh cheeky lil slutty Chaz ;) that was DAUM Hott Kelly ;) I deff don't think I'll divorce u if u write more Like that XD

So Lemon in the first cahapter. That's interesting.

I laughed at the last sentence. You rock!

Call me sick, but I liked it.

Chester is such a slut (in your story) he agreed to give his would-be boss a blow-job in the job interview.

i don't know why i find it super funny.

is this story a one-shot, or will be more??

................KELLY....................................I CAN'T................ ALKDJFHKAJDFAKJHBVGKAHGCFUYATIUDYF OMGF,GHM.HJòHòO...................................................... *dies and burns her body* ....................OMG..................................................................... ............... THIS WAS.......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...I can't believe what I just read O_O to believe it, I have to read it back. LOL

OMG that was just too hot o_o TOO much o_o

and the last phrase was hahahahaha xDDD you rule!! omg

*reads again*

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*and again*

the last line omg hahahahhahahaahhahahhahahahhahahaha u rock :D