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From: lil_lp_lover

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Date: 2005-09-24

Chapter: 1

i like it well done. cherrieos!

From: Forever_Linkin

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Date: 2003-11-07

Chapter: 1

Awwww...dude this was great. I feel so fucking terrible having just noticed this. This is art.

And I love 'the scientist' by Coldplay. Brilliance.

Wonderful stuff Duckster. Truely wonderful.

From: meteoric_hybrid

Email: setsunachan9@aol.com

Date: 2003-10-15

Chapter: 1

tee-hee. the best LP song fic i've read. the scientist is great song, and then to add a bit of an angsty M/C slash...aww it just warms the heart up on a late night. i like. lots.

From: chazzygirl101

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Date: 2003-10-02

Chapter: 1

wow!!! update this is cool!!

From: blackmistress

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Date: 2003-09-30

Chapter: 1

that was beautiful! its soo good. i loved it

From: Halina_Renata

Email: halina_renata@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-09-30

Chapter: 1

That was just beautiful! I was almost crying, it practically radiated off hurt from both sides. And it was very well written. Kudos 2 u!! Write more ones like that cause they're brilliant

From: Tiffany

Email: xlinkingirlx88x@cs.com

Date: 2003-09-29

Chapter: 1

wow, duckums.


that was so powerful. to tell you the truth i haven't been to fflog in a while, and i do believe that you've made me re-addicted. :)


*gives you homoskittles*


i loved all the suttle hints. fucking awesome job. ^.^;

From: Jay

Email: jay_the_angel@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-09-29

Chapter: 1

I loved it. And three words is so little to say in this story, but I really have no idea what else to write...it was perfect.

From: Losing Grip

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Date: 2003-09-29

Chapter: 1

That was so amazing, I absolutly loved it!!!

From: dark_red

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Date: 2003-09-28

Chapter: 1

wow, that was really good. the way you described the scenery really added to the drama of the story, and i love how it was set in a gazebo. it was also really realistic. i can actually picture chester neglecting mike's problems because he's too wrapped up in his own life, and mike quietly adding scars to his wrist because he doesn't want to burden anyone else with his problems. *very* believable.

i agree with Chester's Kawaii kareshi, i like how you didn't have a "happy ending", but you ended it with both characters having hope for the future. it's an ending like that that makes me yearn for some sort of sequel, to see what happens and how everything works out.

anyway, before i start writing Chester's Kawaii kareshi-sized reviews (hehe), i'll just say AWESOME job, and i look forward to more good shit like this!

From: Chester's Kawaii kareshi

Email: yasminepittman@anime-genesis.com

Date: 2003-09-28

Chapter: 1

This was just a beautifully, beautifully written standalone. It really described all of thee emotions you would will on a regretful realtionship.


I think that Chester would act just like this if it ever did happen. What with him having his family, the band, and then Mike to think about, and all of the history that all of the topics involve, he probably would end up being neglectful of Mike's needs.


I really liked this story because it didn't end on a note of either Chester comminting suicide for a mistake he knew would never be forgiven or having Mike hurt him the exact same way him. Instead, you showed the side of possibility and what happened if Chester did have a second chance and how Mike and him would have been left from their previous relationship.


I liked how the story ended as well. It didn't end with them happy ever after, but with hope and thee awareness of their mistakes, that they hopefully won't make again. So that really brought it all home.


Anyway, if I've lost you by now with my review that I've babbled on about, all in all, this was a great story even if you don't think so, and I loved it. Can't wait to see more like this. ^____^

From: dici

Email: krazygl15@wmconnect.com

Date: 2003-09-28

Chapter: 1

awww..how cute..you should add another part to this. It was very well written...I loved it..:)

From: Holly

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Date: 2003-09-28

Chapter: 1

i like standalones like that. short, but sweet =p


that was good... i hope to see something else from you soon :)

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