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From: Afrorials

Date: 2013-07-25

Chapter: ?

I got a recommendation to read this story from my friend. And dude, this is FUCKIN AWESOME SHIT IM DEALING WITH OMFGOMFG. The image is so vivid, omfg what if this really happens? LOL still oh shit oh shit oh shit.


This is soooo fuckin hot slash btw! <3

From: danishinoda

Date: 2010-05-06

Chapter: ?

It was amazing and I hope it could happens! But had a lot of things that's so realistic, like the way they look at each other, like Mike was shamed of Chester sometimes. I don't know, I just know that I love your fic and Bennoda broadcasts as well! LOL

From: Reenzy Bennington

Date: 2010-05-03

Chapter: ?

I'd never survive a broadcast like this.. LOL I liked the story tho.. I was having lunch and I stopped eating and watching TV cause I couldnt take my eyes away from your words.. well done Wifey :D

From: astraloree

Date: 2010-05-02

Chapter: ?

Excellent job! :) What a fabu take on that Ustream chat! It was indeed exactly what all of us living in the bennoda alternate universe have been drooling about since the day it aired!! They amaze me sometimes!! Sooo obvious it's preposterous!! >.<


But I love it...super hot...so realistic and a really cool and interesting twist on the fans watching during the live broadcast...they are gonna have to be careful with that live stuff tho... no Fiore to edit things out... LOL! ie Chester's tattoo comment about Mike in his pants...You were spot on about how pale...and uncomfortable our masterful Mike was when that happened....it was brill...seriously!


Great writing! Thanks for writing and sharing! <3

From: BichosDaFazenda

Date: 2010-05-02

Chapter: ?

OMG, do you imagine if that actually happen? It would be amazing... *enters in dream process* xD


Aside from that, the story turned out even better than I have expected! Obviously uber hot, and a little romantic too, which is also great, Im a sucker for those things LOL xP


And the scene of the pigtails, hilaurious XD Well done, hun [:


Kudos for you (:

From: Kenji_Shinizzle

Date: 2010-05-02

Chapter: ?

HOLY SHIT!

*packs bag to go on a journey to find the girl with the phone*

;)

This was fucking amazing! SO hot! Seriously, DEFINATLY one of my favourites :D

Great job :)

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-05-02

Chapter: ?

*giggle* wow that was fuckin' sexy! :D if only that had really happened LOL.

From: Kelly

Date: 2010-05-01

Chapter: ?

THATTTTTTT WASSSSSSSSSS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT THEYRE FREEEEE THEYRE FREEE OH YEA!!!!


also this was very romantic

From: iamnobody

Date: 2010-05-01

Chapter: ?

I love how naughteh you are.


You just know that tons of Bennoda fans wanna see this happen.


I loved the way you delivered this, with the fans watching the chat all over the world, and the part at the end is is so cute.

From: lplover22

Date: 2010-05-01

Chapter: ?

*bows down* That was beyond amazing!! I LOVED IT!!! Slash was perfect!!! I loved how you got all the POVs in there. Fantastic writing Pinky.

My fav line: he couldn't wait to feel Chester's love spreading out inside him, leaving his body sated with care and affection.

That was just pure love!


Loved it!!! -Numbrocker02

From: J.Sousa

Date: 2010-05-01

Chapter: ?

*Ok, breathe.*


I'm still too awestruck to write a fair, worthy review for this, but I'll try my best.

First of all, this was simply amazing. It was almost like reading an MSN conversation from that same night. I was able to transport myself over that Chat while I was reading this, the sensations were so wonderfully described, so well caught and realistic that it was impossible not to.

As strange as it might sound I sort of felt those butterflies and those nerves, rush and excitement, the ones that the guys where feeling and the fans too. So it was pretty much like watching a real Chat, just only written.


What can I say more? I still feel my stomach hopping a bit from all this.

You did an amazing job, as soon as you told me that you were writing this, just be the title I knew it was going to be grand, and god damn me, I was right, it was so worth the wait!


I love it hun, you're focking awesome, I wasn't expecting any different from you ^^,

*huggles*


*Shit my mother caught me fingerling*

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