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Falls on me. by ironspiral

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From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-09-08

Chapter: 10

Wow I'm retarded I already read the chap. Whatever...still love it.

From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-09-08

Chapter: 10

Sorry my review is so late! I've been very busy and haven't been on lpf in like a month. Anyways just read it now and as always your chap was fabulous. Curios to see where Rob/Jay is going.

From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-07-29

Chapter: 10

Once again I really liked this chap! So now we got Chester/Mike and Rob/Jason! =) This going to get interseting!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-07-24

Chapter: 10

ohhh mike found the voice he always wanna find? XD this feeling good~

nice chap, i like it, and wanna see what will happen after~ :D

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-07-16

Chapter: 9

happy this update, short but good still~

i love the part chaz and mike were driving a car on the road, its feel like a dream for real, think about their different life. awww this so good image. XD


wanna read the next~ good job!

From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-07-15

Chapter: 9

It was a short chap but it was still AWESOME! It's hard to wite long chaps, I know. (If you read my story you'd see all my chaps are short so far.) All I can say is the same ol same old, can't wait for the next chap!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-07-05

Chapter: 8

Man I must have a bad memory or something because I forgot what happened in this story XD.


Well, I really enjoyed this chapter :D I'm glad to see that you updated it.

From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-06-29

Chapter: 8

No problem, how could I not review? Anyways glad you're back. =) I liked this chap and I'm waiting for the next.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-06-27

Chapter: 8

thats good chaz and jason got these help, tho its just a temporary help. i thought about dave too, mike can save chaz from him for real?


this is a good chapter~ waiting for more~ :D

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-05-16

Chapter: 7

good work! :) Roy's help is very timely. >.< tho...awww the evil dave just fanit and what if he will retaliate after? >< awww


wanna read more! waiting for your update~ :D

From: MusicalFrequency

Date: 2010-05-16

Chapter: 7

This story is sooo good! YAY Roy for coming in and saving the day! And I hope that Jason's okay, but I'm scared of what Dave is going to do for revenge now. Anyways, I hope you update soon! I want to know what happens!

From: stefy

Date: 2010-05-15

Chapter: 7

Thank God Roy saved Mike and Jason, but now, I'm scared to see Dave's revenge!

From: FUNsize

Date: 2010-05-12

Chapter: 6

THIS IS REALLY GOOD!! I want to know what going to happen next update soon PLEASE :D

From: danfam4e

Date: 2010-05-06

Chapter: 6

i want more!

From: KingMichael

Date: 2010-05-06

Chapter: 6

amazing! I want to konw how mike could help chester or his friend. it seems difficult, Dave is a evil guy, I dislike him. wish chester and mike will be togeter. continue please!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-05-06

Chapter: 6

happy this update! :D


thats good thing chaz and mike meet again, tho a little awkward, but think mike found chaz was a prostitute now maybe will make things going easy after~ XD


and poor Jason ><


chaz will tell mike all things? or mike really can help him?


wanna know that!

this is a good chapter~ and waiting for the update~ :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-04-26

Chapter: 5

Interesting! I can't wait to read if Chester takes Dave up on the deal or not! (I have a feeling Mike and Chester will meet up in the next chapter as well lol).


Update soon?

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-04-26

Chapter: 5

the last time chaz use his body for money? i wanna know who will buy him tho XD

and awwww plz let chaz and mike meet each other soon~ or maybe chaz will fall in with Dave? dont know ><!

and the Jason, seems a cute guy XD


wanna know what will happen~ and wait for your update~ :D

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-04-17

Chapter: 4

good work as usual~!


looks that Dave not just a tyrannical employer at there for chaz. this interesting.


hope chaz and mike will meet again soon~ XD and wonder what will happen, awww expecting~


waiting for your update~ :D

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2010-04-17

Chapter: 4

So mike will meet chester again in next chap? can't wait the update:).Go on!

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