... I can't believe it took me so long to discover this. It was so so beautiful. In an eerie kind of way the story was absolutely stunning! So so heartbreaking... I thought they would be united as well.. Though I feel like the story made a deeper impact by them not being reunited. The last sentence was chilling. Amazing, simply amazing.

Omfg lauren I'm crying!! I love tho-in a bittersweet way-that when he dies it isn't some reunion. I mean it's heartbreaki g but sooooooo fucking beautiful!!!!

Very few mistakes but you may want to get a beta anyways.

Hauntingly beautiful.

aww that was sad! :(

and your voice was all i heard that i get what i deserve

Wow that was so good but so sad. Great job!

Bittersweet story. Very good.