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Snow by lplover22

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From: Kasai

Date: 2010-05-29

Chapter: 1

Oooh, I really liked this! =) If you decide to multi-chapter is, great! But I also really liked it as a standalone. The fan-art was perfect for the inspiration and you conveyed the message perfectly in your fanfic! The descriptions were just enough to keep the story interesting and I adored every second of it! Fantastic job!

From: xBirdie

Date: 2010-05-05

Chapter: 1

Awesomly written and horraaay for picking up that fanart, I loved it so much!

I like your writing style and I liked the switching POV's. Homophobia sucks much and I'm really pissed about people beating someone randomly up just because he loves a guy. I so hate that... and I'll never understand.


I hope you'll continue, soon. :)

From: iamnobody

Date: 2010-04-20

Chapter: 1

Short and sweet, but a continuation would be awesome.


Very suspenseful, me likey.

From: TwistedTransistor

Date: 2010-03-29

Chapter: 1

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

From: J.Sousa

Date: 2010-03-17

Chapter: 1

This is awesome!! A very promessing plot, I love the warm smile towards Chester when Mike introduces himself, gives you that idea that everything's gonna be fine :)

I can't wait to see what comes next, but I'm waiting to find out! OwO

From: BichosDaFazenda

Date: 2010-03-16

Chapter: ?

Aaaw, this story is just wonderfull! (: Please, update soon, I want to see what happens next C=

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2010-03-15

Chapter: ?

cant w8 for more :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-03-14

Chapter: ?

I really liked that drawing I'm glad someone took it up and started writing a story! :) I can't wait for you to update soon! This chapter was pretty good :)

From: ironspiral

Date: 2010-03-14

Chapter: ?

homophobia...beurk.disgusting.

it was sad just how chester is so sure he's gonna die. so cute when mike was carrying him to the hospital.

i love almost-dying stories, and it was well written too =) i'd love a next chapter to see what they become after =).

loved it.

From: ironspiral

Date: 2010-03-14

Chapter: ?

homophobia...beurk.disgusting.

it was sad just how chester is so sure he's gonna die. so cute when mike was carrying him to the hospital.

i love almost-dying stories, and it was well written too =) i'd love a next chapter to see what they become after =).

loved it.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-03-14

Chapter: ?

Awwww i love that fanart so much! XD


and you did a good work about this story! poor chaz, awwww when chaz waiting to die i feel so sad. but happy mike found him and take care of him ><


love this~:D

From: stefy

Date: 2010-03-14

Chapter: ?

The part were Chester is sure he is going to die is very touched, I liked this story very much, you express the feeling of Chester and Mike very well, hope there is a sequel to know what happen to them.

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