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Casuistry by Kelly

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From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

EEEPPP omg im so sorry im late but omg this chap is sooo fucking adorable, these boys are so perfect together, i want them to be together forever l3

From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

awww. those two are just too adorable, and so beautiful, well done, this is exceptional.

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

Ch 5 Review:


THAT WAS SO SWEET!! I love fluff!! <3 <3


I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm so worried that they're not going to get to be together when Michael has to go home!! Update soon! This is such a great story!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

Ch4 Review:


I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! God that was such a fluffy hot chapter!! The kiss was PERFECT! So innocent yet fiery! There's something about forbidden love that just gets me!! I'm definitely rating this story and putting it in my favorites!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

Ch3 Review:


AMAZING!! ::sighs in bliss:: Michael is so charming in this story! He got chester an ankle bracelet that he simply looked at adoringly. I wish this kind of chivalry was in my life! I absolutely love both of their personalities in this story. Chester is faithful, yet you can tell he's feeling something towards Michael. OH NOZ he found out Michael's a PRINCE!! I wonder why Chester left in such a hurry!!


Oba . . . he was actually pretty sexy in my mind's eye ::wink:: I have a feeling he's going to make some trouble in future chapters.


I am in love with this story. It's so fluffy!!!!


On to r/r the next chapter!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

Ch2 Review:


OMG that chapter was.. epic! It was so hot. A bath scene ::dies:: This story just keeps getting better and better with each chapter! It is so beautifully written. I love it!! Chester is like this prized possession and so desirable, yet Michael can't have him like he so wishes.. I can't wait to read the next chapter!! On to r/r ch3!

From: PaperWulf

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

Ch1 Review:


Wow! This chapter just... wow, I am totally loving this story. I am a SUCKER for alternate universe stories! Kelly, welcome back! I know exactly how you feel! I took a five year break as well. As soon as I submitted that first chapter to my story.. it was like heaven!


Great collaboration between the two of you, Kelly and Vampire Princess!! I'm off to read the next chapter and review it! This is so original, so amazing! The way you described Chester.. I'm STILL drooling. It was like having a god grace you with his presence. Amazing!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-09-07

Chapter: 5

awwww they just so cute with each other, and the dialogue sound very warm. and the part chaz siad he is afraid to know the world outside made me feel kinda sad for him, hummm >.< i hope he could to see the world, with mike oc, mike can take care of him ><

awww there are just really sweet!

and i wanna see the next, i wanna know what will happen, think about the pharaoh, i feel some worried.

good chap!~ :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-09-06

Chapter: 5

Aw how cute! I've almost forgotten what we did in this story! We so need to write more dood lol.

From: Ghost of Mike

Date: 2010-06-29

Chapter: 4

I love your story,it's great :) wanna read more!

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2010-06-26

Chapter: 4

GAH! sorry im so late girlies ;_; i can be a terrible proicrastinator[sp?] at times


oh sooo romantic, Kelly you were right when you said i'd enjoy this chapter XD their kiss was hot AND sweet ;) and I love that theyre planning to steal away for the night *.* heres hoping they dont get caught x3


update soon ya'here? xxxxxxx

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-06-24

Chapter: 4

God! god! god!

fuckin' suspense!!

great chapter,

wanna read more!

@.@

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2010-06-24

Chapter: 4

what? they wanna elope just under the Pharoah's eyes, awww im so worried about them ><. and the Pharoah regards chaz like his personal property, how could he let them go that easy?


i wanna know what will happen so much! this is a good chp, and always waiting for the next~ :D

From: domMike

Date: 2010-06-24

Chapter: 4

GO BITCH KILL ISIS! :D :D

From: domMike

Date: 2010-06-24

Chapter: 4

UPDATE PLEASE!!! I love this story!

I loved when chester came in view, such a hot lady <3 lol UPDATEEE! :D :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2010-06-23

Chapter: 4

*reviews for the hell of it* I feel bad, I've forgotten what happened in this story! XD Well I suppose that's good because it's a big surprise for me now :) I loved writing this with you seriously, we need to get to work on it again before we catch up with ourselves on here!

From: Francis Spire

Date: 2010-06-23

Chapter: 4

Oh my sweet baby Jebediah!!!! Update! Update! Update! Do it now!!!! I loved that! And now I'm so close to some beautiful Egyptian slash! Please?!?!?!?!?!! I think I want it more than them! Spectacular job!

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-06-21

Chapter: 3

I review 4 times 'cuz i want ya to update soon!

=]

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-06-21

Chapter: 3

NOOOO!

GOD!

I WANT MORE!

WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!

please update!!

i really like this story...

^^

From: EMCEE

Date: 2010-06-21

Chapter: 3

NOOOO!

GOD!

I WANT MORE!

WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN!!!

please update!!

i really like this story...

^^

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