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A Bennoda Christmas by Kenji_Shinizzle

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From: someone

Date: 2010-01-02

Chapter: 1

I loved it! The only thing I could suggest is, instead of pink lips, perhaps write 'rosy lips' I dunno why, I just think it sounds more of an interesting colour. :]


FANTASTIC THOUGH.

10/10

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-12-26

Chapter: 1

Cute! :3 I wuvd this story.

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-12-26

Chapter: 1

That was good! And hot too! I just love Bennoda Christmas story :D So sweet :)

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-12-25

Chapter: 1

awwww! Sooo cute and incredibly hot ;) u dun have to worry about tractors Hun XD

From: J.Sousa

Date: 2009-12-25

Chapter: 1

Aaaawww, Joe's part made me giggle so hard! I love his "chubby face" that part was epic, and I love the part where it says that Joe gives little Otie a froggy ^___^


This is really awesome, I giggled throught the all thing, I just love the fluffy parts!!

And the tattoos!! Oh God, this was a hell of a confession from Mike, I tottaly get it, this is why he never takes he's shirt off...xDD


Loved it ^^,

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