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10 Years by domxho
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From: iamnobody
Date: 2010-02-09
Chapter: ?
Sorry hun but... gas station bathroom... not sexy. I have nothing against bathroom sex, like, maybe a restroom at a restaurant, or another public place... Otherwise, you worded the first chapter very, very well.
This might be a bad time to mention this but, I finished chapter three of Balloonia. I dunno how I like the chapter, because it's not as humorous as the first two...
From: Disorderly Conduct.
Date: 2009-12-14
Chapter: ?
lol they were like "hi! its so great to see you agai--" (automatically switches to sex in bathroom scene)
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-12-11
Chapter: ?
I liked the ending. This type of vague is nice. I loved how they just walked out of the bathroom. :) Very nice. Bennoda is good! :D
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-12-09
Chapter: ?
Awwwww~~! 10 years, thats really long time, im happy they are stay with each other at last, or will be so pity, and sad. but now just happy! XDD
and i love the "need you in my life" and "don’t ever leave" thing, soooo sweet and love!
good work! ><! add fav!
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-12-06
Chapter: ?
AWWWWWWWWWWW i LOVE this, so fxxking HOTTT! Sex in the bathroom, thats so naughty and definitely exciting~!
and they made a mess~ XDD thats so image. and i love those kiss, thats feeling love in sexual act.
face the world?
awww i wanna read the next chapter so much! good work! :D
From: Drpepper199
Date: 2009-12-05
Chapter: ?
Wow. Just wow. Allison, you have evolved so much as a writer. It's not even funny.
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-12-05
Chapter: ?
Yes! Another chapter!! That was so hot. Sex in the bathroom and the rawness of it. *fans self* Great job! I'm so happy they'll be a bit more!
PS Nice name change. I got confused looking for this and then realized that you changed your name. :)
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-12-04
Chapter: ?
XDDD great story, its cute and hot, a ten years missed, at last they meet each other again, thats happy. and you leave it there just very evil. LOL
From: axl adamic
Date: 2009-12-04
Chapter: ?
Oooh nooo! You can't stop here! Devil XD That didn't suck! Maybe it was a bit rush but still good :) Please update soon!
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-12-03
Chapter: ?
No smut. :'( Tease. lol/jk Great story. See how well Bennoda flows. And you have a real talent for writing it. Can't wait to see more of your stuff!
From: J.Sousa
Date: 2009-12-03
Chapter: ?
Awesome job!
I love the fact that they were so happy when they saw each other, there were no dramas or anything like that when they ran against each other. They were just happy! :)
I also love the fact that it's a very light and easy reading, very detailed and graphic without being too boring.
Keep the good work, congratulations :D
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From: wz
Date: 2014-05-04
Chapter: 3
LOVED IT <3