Oh god.

Chester really has gone mad :(

oh no :(

I really hope mike is able to help him.

Please update soon!!

*cookies*

geeeeeee this story is so intense

You're killing me!! Absolutly killing me it all this suspence!! This had better be up in two days cos I have a selection of tractors and I will not hesitate in drivng up and torturing you with john and Edward until the next chap is up....

I should really come up with more nrmal threats

WTH?!? I'm so confused.........what's going on? Is that Draven........hope so. Where's Megan and why is Dave still alive?!?

So the trauma goes on for mike and Chester :/

this is such a gripping story! I love it! I really am hooked.

This was a great update! I really hope Mike and Chester find eachother.

They need eachother :/

please update soon ^.^

*gives you bennoda cookies*

Draven?

GAH I'm soooo curious!!!! I wanna know!!! You're torturing me Lauren *pout*

awesome chap as always, I just love this story, it's one of the ones I'm always delighted to see updated <333

update soon ;)

"mike was dead" ?????????????/ what do u mean "mike was deaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad"

This story is getting so good. I'm so happy Chester and the kids escaped. Unfortunately Megan is missing. I hope they find her and Chester and Draven make it. Can't wait for the next update!!!

I hope Dave is dead!! Poor Megan, man I hope they find her and quickly. That monster killed her mommy and baby sister. I just can't believe he killed his daughter.........that bastard!

LOL yeah!!!!! So glad that's over with. Hopefully mike and chaz will be together soon <333

Love you for this hun

Omg... YES!!

Chester got away! Thank god he shot that basterd...

Poor draven and megan... :'( nothing like that should happen to anyone.

I hope dave doesn't get up and find them. I hope that cuny DIES!! XD

will ches find mike? or visa versa?

Will everything work out?

Please let everyone be ok!! (excluding dave XP)

update sooooooon!!! ^.^ *hands you cookies*

This is getting so out of control. Chester's only been there a little while, but ugh it's just horrible! I hope Mike gets his revenge. Especially before what your alluding to in the next chapter will happen.

you are soooooooo evil!!!

this was such an amazing chapter and I NEED to see the next one!!!

I swear Lauren if this isnt up within a week I will....steal a tractor and drive across the boarder and force you to write it....yeah....ok....

lol but seriously amazing as always <33333

Bad enough David have Chester and those babies, Sam did not help. I can understand but still girl! Hope the guys find Chester and the kids quickly!

dun dun dun!!

Omfg.... He killed his own wife?! Wow he needs help!

and to kill her in front of his kids aswell! >.<

I hope mike gets to him and kills that basterd.

That wad pure evil playing 'In Between' to Chester, and then to tell him to dance.... EVIL!

At least lindsy told him the way out.

Now he has a slim chance of suvival.

How dave can do tht to draven is beyond me.

A really great chapter!!

I was so Hooked I almost got caught in school lol

update soon!! *gives you bennoda cookies* ^.^

*gasps* Dang!! I can't believe he did that to her! She stuck by his side thru all this and he killed her. Dave is very evil!!

~My heart had been fighting hard to stop thinking about it's owner.~

I LOVE that line!!!!

Seriously hun I cant WAIT for the next chp, I'm hooked! PURLEASE update soon

ARGHHHHHHH! what a cunt! >.< *hates dave*

I really hope mike, chaz and karma kicks his ass!

Will the police be able to help?

is draven ok?

Update soon!!!!!!!!

O.o WTF just happened!!! That was so crazy and now poor Chester and Draven!! Please don't let anything happen to Draven!!!!!!! Going crazy here! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!