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Californian Summer by NoxLP

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From: wz

Date: 2014-05-02

Chapter: 2

Amazing

From: domMike

Date: 2010-08-20

Chapter: 2

AWESOME! *drools* keep writing!

From: Kenji_Shinizzle

Date: 2009-08-20

Chapter: 1

Sorry about this, I read this ages ago and never reviewed :S

I really liked this :D

I love the two titles xD

This story made me laugh at parts, aww at parts and then the end was just hot ;)

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-08-04

Chapter: 1

It's back :D

From: lplover22

Date: 2009-07-24

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Um, you updated this but I don't see the update. :( Why can't I see it!!!!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-07-23

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haha that was a very good chapter :) I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait to see your next story.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-07-23

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Woooow! what a HOOOT summer! LOL I love it so much~

*add to fav*


They have a really good day and night, and this "apology" just totally fantastic XD I think this is Chaz's fav too~

Happily bennoda yay~ XD


and I hope you write more, I will always expecting that~ :D wonderful work~

From: stefy

Date: 2009-07-23

Chapter: ?

Very hot!

Keep writing.

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-07-23

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Oh that was sooo hot! Love it <3 Bennoda smex is always good ;) Oooh and I hope you will write another story like this one soon, very soon :)

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-07-23

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Damn.... That was a hot night XP

that was so awesome ^.^

tut tut impaitent(sp?) chazzy lol

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2009-07-22

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Totally love it! Mike's apology was hot like the summer sun:)

From: ][llusionary

Date: 2009-07-22

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While I really liked your fic and that was some HOT! Bennoda action, the sheer amount of spelling, grammar, tense (as in past tense, future tense etc.), and phrasing errors was just too distracting for me to be able to enjoy this fic properly. If this hasn't been betaed, I'd suggest you to get that done. If it has been betaed, your beta is either not a native English speaker, or you need someone who isn't afraid to hurt your feelings and mark up and correct the hell out of your fic. I also apologize for that attrocious run-on sentence!

From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-07-22

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You could not have ended your story the way you did your first chapter; that's cruel and unusual.


And then I eagerly anticipated the second part. By the time it came, Jesus had also returned to earth and in Hell, there's not much to do except read fics :D


This was well worth the wait, like fine wine.

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-07-22

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Loved it! Those two and their ways, lol!

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-07-22

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Kwaii, so great! You totally deserve another 12 reviews hun :D Loved this, I know you're synical of it but I love it ^-^

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-14

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Awwwww you were so evil stop here! XDDD


This chapter make me love summer, whatever in Californian or here, so fucking hot day =.=...yeah, but now I can image Mike in the pool and feel enjoy, and poor little Chaz at there whined like a puppy~ omg this scene so cute! lol


Wanna know what Mike will do, give chaz a enough attention and hot evening? lol

Anyway, waiting for the next!~

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-06-14

Chapter: ?

*snickers* Baby Chester and red hot Mikey! Payback Shinoda!

From: LPD

Date: 2009-06-14

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Niiice! Me likey slash, but i didn't get any! Meanie! I'm waiting till the next chap :P

From: BlackFairy

Date: 2009-06-14

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yes yes!!go with the second chapter pleeeease!!!!

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-06-14

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Update! Update!

I gotta read mikes apology :)

That was awesome! :D

Update soon!

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