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New Divide by Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

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From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-08-30

Chapter: 19

well the chapter was kinda shorter than the other ones but its ok,i forgive u :P grrrrrrrrr mike's mother is such a bitch........

From: stefy

Date: 2009-08-30

Chapter: 19

Ok, Mike's mother is a bitch, Mike's friends are all birches, it seems that the only good person in his life is Chester, Thank God!

I'm sooooo excited for the surgery, I hope next chap. will be soon, or I'll risk an heart attack.

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-08-30

Chapter: 19

Aww I can't wait for Mike to see again :) And that Marie girl was so sweet! This story seems so real, you're fucking awesome hun!

From: *Princess*Of*Darkness*

Date: 2009-08-30

Chapter: 19

I dont know how i feel about Mike being able 2 see. i feel like its really going to change the story. i guess we'll just have 2 see. i love the story dont get me wrong, but i think it'll really change. =]

From: DrummerLadyBourdon

Date: 2009-08-28

Chapter: 18

[DrummerLadyBourdon: glad you liked all the Rob bits hun :D] |}}}} *enjoys rob immensely*


[His dark eyes lit up every time the red flame danced on front of him.] I like that line. :D


[...and he turned to see a blue haired male sitting beside Rob who was using Dodge to chat up young women.] |}}}}} mmmmmm rob *pets his poodle*


[All he needed was a KFC bucket and Chester to curl up next to, but Chester didn't understand that.] XD I like that line.


["You are so adorable."] *says the same to rob* >D


[Dodge yelped as Mike suddenly fisted his fur accidentally from simple shock.] x33333 poor dodge.


bum bum buuuuuuum.


:gimmekissplz:



<3

From: lplover22

Date: 2009-08-28

Chapter: 18

:D I'm so excited!! Great chapter. I didn't see that coming! Though his mom ruined it. :( And by the sound of the preview for the next chapter, she's not going to be all lovey dovey. I can't wait for Mike to get his sight back. Those two are adorable together.

From: Drpepper199

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

that was so cute!!! I'm jealous of Mike and I'm jealous of Chester. How is that even possible!? Oh wait... I get it. Ha.

I was shocked by the news that Brad gave. I can't wait til Mike can see again! Does this mean that the story will be over soon? =/

Update soon, pretty please? Pretty pretty please? =)

From: BlackFairy

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

o god!I am SO sorry I didn't review for what?..1 month??

I just read all the chapters I missed during this period and I don't know what to say!!this fic is something wonderful!!I just love it!!

From: vws_[lpfan]_83

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

I really enjoy where this going :) you rock

From: vws_[lpfan]_83

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

I really enjoy where this going :) you rock

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

had*

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

omg i have assumed that mike would be able to see again!!i knew u couldnt leave him blind forever! ^^

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

Great u update~<33


AWWWWW Mike might get to see again? at last Chaz know that Mike might to see again and wanna help him and cuz he love him to see this world to see him!! omg! thats sooooo...i mean soooo in love! XD I love that vivacious/strong/pure love between them! I love they way Chaz sobbed into Mikes neck cuz he use his full heart to care him, and I love after a worried night and a open heart talk, in the morning they happy and funny like kids.


ohhh i dont know why after 7 years Mikes mom call him again, i cant wonder the reason. need u tell us~ XD


A amazing chapter~ and i need the next~

Plz update soon~ :D

From: NoxLP

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

omg..I was a nervous wreck during my last class because i saw u updated and I didn't have the time to read and review!


Mike will see again? OMG! That's great and I thought he kept something bad from Chester *relieved* BUt I understand he didn't tell him becaus ehe didn't want him to think he wanted his money more than him! Chester is so great to give Mike the opportunitiy to get his sight beack although its quite a rush I think its the best move. After all he just wants Mike to see again. I mean..he is lucky he actually has the chance not to be blind for the rest of his life! Chazy is the best!


WTF? Afetr SEVEN years his mum calls just like that saying sorry? What got into her mind? Did ANYONE talk to her and told her sth. that might change her mind? I sense something happened here... I understand Mike is shocked and confused about his mother calling him!


The wait was so worth it! The chapter is great and gives so much hope for the future! Mike might see again...his mum maybe will finally accept that he's gay.. (although I am not sure) and he will be with Chester. I really wish it will be this way!


Awesome Chapter! ANd I can't wait for the next one! Good job as usuall =) Love this Story!

From: Nika_love_lp

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

Wooh, ok))) hmmm, where to start. I didn't think about Mike's sight at all....I was thinking along the lines of...hmm no, I didn't think at all to make it more interesting))

I love the fact that Mike will finally be able to see the world's beauty (guess I can say that). I totally agree with the line "KFC bucket and Chester to curl up next to" - who wouldn't want it?? LOL

Chester's monologue about the sun and the ocean and himself made me cry...because there are people in our world who can't see it and enjoy it - which is really sad, but this is just a story, so it's alright))

Oh, and Mike's mom - I didn't expect it at all. I mean, she abandoned him for seven years and now...on the exact day of the operation (or the registration - whatever) she called, that's kind of weird. Anyways, I want to know what Mike will think of Chester (pff..we already know it LOL)

P.S. following you on twitter now))

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

eeep 4AM..I need to stop staying up all night. Anyways! Omg Mike might get to see again!?!?! :O!!! EXCITING! :D PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

Aww that was so fucking sweet! I'm so happy that Mike will see again, you have no idea! This was the best idea ever hun, you're fantastic! My God, I'm so in love with this story, amazing!

From: Kenji_Shinizzle

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

Mike is gonna seeee?!

YAY :D

Bekka this chapter rocked!

I'm kind of curious about Mike's mum....but I wasn't expecting him to be getting his site back!

I love this!

Update soon :D

-Lauren xx

From: Vernie

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

I stand by what I've said. Your writing blows me awake Bekka!! I loved this chapter. I could feel chesters and mikes emotions. So beautiful.


- vernisha

From: stefy

Date: 2009-08-27

Chapter: 18

Oh my God! I finish another box of kleenex!

I think it's so sweet that Mike would prefer to be blind for the rest of his life instead of asking Chester's money, that show how much he loves him.

Now, why his mother come back now? Maybe she saw the tabloid and since his son is dating a famous and rich model, she wants his money?

I can't wait for the next 3 chap., I'm going to buy other kleenex!

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