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Beautiful by Alice

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From: wz

Date: 2014-03-12

Chapter: 3

I wish you never left. Your stories are pure awesomeness.

From: nab

Date: 2014-02-21

Chapter: 3

Beautiful

From: domMike

Date: 2010-08-20

Chapter: 3

I just want you to know that if you'll come back, many will be happy to see you. me included. it's just so full of people that read your stories, along with the other author's, and don't even sign in to leave a reply. I just met one yesterday.

hope you'll write again one day, I'll wait :) just know that you write REALLY GOOD.

*hugs*

From: domMike

Date: 2010-07-31

Chapter: 3

I miss your stories

From: danfam4e

Date: 2009-09-24

Chapter: 3

Please continue!

From: Iris

Date: 2009-08-19

Chapter: 3

This is really my LONG TIME FAVORITE one ~~~

Luv it!!!

大爱大爱啊~如此纠结的心理描写~啊我爱怯怯的C~

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2009-08-11

Chapter: 3

The romantic story need a romantic epilogue. Hope your final chapter will come up soon!

From: stefy

Date: 2009-08-11

Chapter: 3

That's a very sweet and romantic story, I really hope you'll write an epilogue.

From: danishinoda

Date: 2009-08-09

Chapter: 3

Owww your history is amazing at all, a little bit sad and I loved! I am waiting for the epilogue! :D

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-08-09

Chapter: 3

Wow!~ I love this story! supter love! XD

I'm so happy Chaz can found his true love, this guy will love him and save him and stay there for him! awwww! >< fantastic!


Plz write an epilogue! I really love to read your story! great work!:D

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-08-09

Chapter: 3

Aww this is just too cute!!! Seriously Hun you're one of the bennoda gods on this site! I'm seriously hoping to see more of your stories in the future :D

From: lploverforever

Date: 2009-08-09

Chapter: 3

please please do an epiloge ill give u lp cookies if u do!!!!!!!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-08-09

Chapter: 3

aww that was cute :) yay for fluff!

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-08-08

Chapter: 3

Epilouge!! You need to do one :)

ches finally told someone about his problems!

They love each other yay ^.^ *dances*

I'm glad ches feels safe now

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-08-08

Chapter: 3

nooooooo plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont end this story yet!

From: Rhi =]

Date: 2009-08-08

Chapter: 3

That was an amazing story chester found love!!!

i was gonna cry it was soo sweet :)

please write an epilogue!!

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-08-08

Chapter: 3

Aww the end was sweet! I really like this story, I hope you'll update soon ;D

From: Ben

Date: 2009-06-29

Chapter: 1

fuckfuckfuck this stuff gave me new vitality, i lovelovelove it!!!!!!! u should update soon!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-06-26

Chapter: 1

AWWWWW!! this was soooo HOT! >.< Amazing and unbelievable hot!


I love the way they have sex, like, Mike lifted Chaz's long legs on his shoulders and Chaz watched himself so wide open to this man. and how despotic[in a good way tho lol] Mike was, and Chaz like a "like a wounded animal" but still need the fuck...this feeling just so porn~ omg so many line made me happy in my pants~ LOL I really love it~ XD


And looks there something happend on poor Chaz long time ago. Awww I wanna read the next!!

Please update soon! love this story! :D

From: mistofstars

Date: 2009-06-26

Chapter: 1

are you insane!? How can't this be good?! This was amazing! I loved and love it! So incredibly well written! These feelings and thoughts, huh, and what a hot slash scene, woaaah... (and I know your age, so be ashamed! :lol: ) Uhm.. I saw a few mistakes in it, though... e.g. when it comes to conjugating verbs, you did some mistakes, for example "cummed"... well... I would have written came... but I dunno :lol: Your writing skills definitely overcame such little flaws

Anyhow! I can't WAIT TO READ MORE! This was so cool and it feels like it's getting better and better <3 (oh, and maybe, if you're searching for a beta reader, I'm not a native speaker as you know but maybe I could help a bit out <3)

And thx for the dedication you rule <3

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