please tell me that's not it?! i've got to finish it off

my favorite part of the whole thing is that it has the whole 'love at first sight' type of theme but you don't make it seem so cliche =]

absolutely love Mike's enduring yet so convincing words that really moved me

this was a sweet story :)

you've got to carry it on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you've absolutely got to!!!!!!!

soooo good! continue this, it's so cute!:)

love it!!you should continue this cus it's really good xD

love hurts is sweet, yummy i enjoyed it!

["I'll never make you cry." He placed a light kiss just underneath Chester's eye were his tears used to rest."I'll never break your heart" He takes hold of Chester's head in his hands and placed another light kiss, this time on his forehead. "I'll never leave you." Their lips make contact and It feels as if a wave of electricity has been shot through both of them.]

That was the BEST. my fave part while reading this. simply delicious.

-danni

Aww I loved it!

I really loved this, it was very cute :3

I love this story. especially the line:

"Come with me"

"Where?"

"Anywhere."

Whoa~ direct romantic! XD found a new love, found a new life. Hope they will happy~ :D

Good work, add to fav~

warm story XD I like it~