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Gardener from heaven by Alice
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From: SHOrTwiRED
Date: 2009-06-27
Chapter: 3
hmm... im kinda lost... but no biggy...
*I LOVE JONATHAN DAVIS!!!! in fact... 'freak on a leash' is my ringtone X)...*
...(back to the story review)... I was really interested in the story... though it could use a bit more detail, although, it is quite easy to forget detail... so im not gonna punish you... :)
From: Mourning Star
Date: 2009-02-15
Chapter: 2
Good story, I really liked reading it. You have some good ideas. Hope you dont mind a little constructive criticism. I'm a little OCD when it comes to this, but I just like to help a writer become better =). Make sure you spell the right word. I almost tend to think English is not your first language the way you spell phonetically on some words. Ex. "Chapter 1-bugle instead of buckle". Also the structuring of some sentances as well. But other than that I loved it. Keep up with writing.
From: KingMichael
Date: 2009-02-14
Chapter: 2
Chester was very angry.....wow.. wana see more..hope you update..
From: Penelope_Ink
Date: 2009-02-14
Chapter: 2
Ohhh poor Mike, he has to face the cruel reality. Can he deal with that? I'm looking forward your next chap.
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2009-02-14
Chapter: 2
YAY! you update! I'm so happy~~ :D
This chapter so great, I totally wanna know how Mike will handle this. And Chester, what he will react if he know that Mike has a girlfriend.
Really love this story, Please update soon~ :D
From: Vampire Princess
Date: 2009-02-13
Chapter: 2
uh oh :O that's not good! This is gettin' really interesting, update again please! *puppy eyes*
From: Orchid
Date: 2009-02-13
Chapter: 2
NOOO!!!!!!! WHY DID U STOP THERE!!!!!! its getting craaaazzyy!!!!!!! lol
u better update soon or feel my wrath >< .. i joke, i joke ^_^
From: lplover22
Date: 2009-02-13
Chapter: 2
Why did you do it. *cries* I want a happy Bennoda smex, not drama Anna crap. WE WANT A BLOOD TEST!!!
Great chapter! :D
From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut
Date: 2009-02-13
Chapter: 2
OHH MY GOD!!! That was such a twist! Have to know what happens next!!!
From: axl adamic
Date: 2009-02-13
Chapter: 2
well now my dear friend ill tell you why you continue this so take note:its so fucking interesting and good!i really like this an now im dead curios to know what will mike do and chester too so yeah plz continue this cus its not ridiculous actually the opposite xD so plz update another chap as soon as you can!
From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut
Date: 2009-01-27
Chapter: 1
Wow! Pure wow! Absolutly brilliant! LOVE IT!!
From: xXloversxfadexX
Date: 2008-12-30
Chapter: 1
Not horrible at all! Pretty awesome actually, but then again I feel that way about all bennoda, lol.
Tip: thesaurus and beta. Also, I'm wondering if mike will remember to wash his sheets before Anna gets home.
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From: domMike
Date: 2010-08-20
Chapter: 3
I read it so long time ago and still can't stop reading. just AWESOME story. there's everything!! good job! *adds to fav*