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Gardener from heaven by Alice

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From: domMike

Date: 2010-08-20

Chapter: 3

I read it so long time ago and still can't stop reading. just AWESOME story. there's everything!! good job! *adds to fav*

From: SHOrTwiRED

Date: 2009-06-27

Chapter: 3

hmm... im kinda lost... but no biggy...

*I LOVE JONATHAN DAVIS!!!! in fact... 'freak on a leash' is my ringtone X)...*

...(back to the story review)... I was really interested in the story... though it could use a bit more detail, although, it is quite easy to forget detail... so im not gonna punish you... :)

From: lploverforever

Date: 2009-04-26

Chapter: 2

please carry on its got me hooked!!!!

From: vws_[lpfan]_83

Date: 2009-03-13

Chapter: 2

Keep this story going I dig it:)

From: Mourning Star

Date: 2009-02-15

Chapter: 2

Good story, I really liked reading it. You have some good ideas. Hope you dont mind a little constructive criticism. I'm a little OCD when it comes to this, but I just like to help a writer become better =). Make sure you spell the right word. I almost tend to think English is not your first language the way you spell phonetically on some words. Ex. "Chapter 1-bugle instead of buckle". Also the structuring of some sentances as well. But other than that I loved it. Keep up with writing.

From: Vixenla

Date: 2009-02-14

Chapter: 2

*blinks* Dang, you're screwed Mike!

From: deleteme

Date: 2009-02-14

Chapter: 2

ILU!!! This story is sooo good! Please continue!

From: KingMichael

Date: 2009-02-14

Chapter: 2

Chester was very angry.....wow.. wana see more..hope you update..

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2009-02-14

Chapter: 2

Ohhh poor Mike, he has to face the cruel reality. Can he deal with that? I'm looking forward your next chap.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2009-02-14

Chapter: 2

YAY! you update! I'm so happy~~ :D

This chapter so great, I totally wanna know how Mike will handle this. And Chester, what he will react if he know that Mike has a girlfriend.

Really love this story, Please update soon~ :D

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

uh oh :O that's not good! This is gettin' really interesting, update again please! *puppy eyes*

From: Orchid

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

NOOO!!!!!!! WHY DID U STOP THERE!!!!!! its getting craaaazzyy!!!!!!! lol


u better update soon or feel my wrath >< .. i joke, i joke ^_^

From: lplover22

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

Why did you do it. *cries* I want a happy Bennoda smex, not drama Anna crap. WE WANT A BLOOD TEST!!!

Great chapter! :D

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

OHH MY GOD!!! That was such a twist! Have to know what happens next!!!

From: axl adamic

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

well now my dear friend ill tell you why you continue this so take note:its so fucking interesting and good!i really like this an now im dead curios to know what will mike do and chester too so yeah plz continue this cus its not ridiculous actually the opposite xD so plz update another chap as soon as you can!

From: Ben

Date: 2009-02-13

Chapter: 2

ahahah!! pregnant girlfriend! big trouble! i love it!

From: vws_[lpfan]_83

Date: 2009-02-12

Chapter: 1

keep writing..wicked hot :)

From: Bekka-the-bennoda-slut

Date: 2009-01-27

Chapter: 1

Wow! Pure wow! Absolutly brilliant! LOVE IT!!

From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2008-12-30

Chapter: 1

Not horrible at all! Pretty awesome actually, but then again I feel that way about all bennoda, lol.


Tip: thesaurus and beta. Also, I'm wondering if mike will remember to wash his sheets before Anna gets home.

From: linkingal

Date: 2008-12-28

Chapter: 1

Oh, sorry. WP>wrong person.

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