An Army of Lovers Cannot Fail by Elisa

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From: BlackFairy

Date: 2009-04-06

Chapter: 1

maybe I'm being silly but...I've reread your fic almot thousand times..and now I'm convinced that this is my fav fics above all..I mean..how can tears come to me every single time I read this?is always the same..but..it's wonderful!!

omg I'm realli -SO- silly :)

From: BlackFairy

Date: 2009-03-11

Chapter: 1

I'm actually crying.

Trust me..I know this is just a fic but..god..what you wrote is something uncredible..

I wanted to write something good,leave you a nice review to make you really understand how much I'm in love with this fic but I don't know what to say..

this is pure love..

but it's also truly sad..but I think love and sadness sometimes go together..

when chester says ''I want so badly for you to live your life, instead of enduring it.'' and then I want you to be able...To love openly whom you choose to love.'' well..I think this is the saddest part of all the fic..because I can only imagine how sick I would feel I the person I love would sacrifice himself and just..leave me a post..how can chester actually think mike will live without him?what chester has done is great for all the people but..what about mike?this siply shows how unfair life could be..

I still have tears in my eyes..good job.

From: starscream

Date: 2008-11-16

Chapter: 1

puts this here as well~

“You were right,” Mike says. “I can’t trust any of them – I can’t trust anybody but you.”

... :( omg my bennoda, mike is so... fragile in this fic. they both are; i see right past chester's stoic, emotionless demeanor. you can try to make him vacuous but i know better~

michael and his black market connections :3 omg did i die or what? the mental image of him sitting like a child on the kitchen floor with his box of toys... omg it's too much! and the contents of that box! him and his handcuffs... what a curious boy =D =D =D i'm glad he had a chester to play with, it would be a shame if those cuffs went to waste. i'm still trying to decide who was restrained... ^_^

i can't forgive you, no matter how much cuteness you did give, for killing chester. and i believe he did die... because he is an idiot and did things specifically as requested. it wasn't like some stupid action movie where he figured something out at the last minute and survived because you would have written that if it were true, right? right? omg pls my poor chester :( nevertheless the note he left, the way it was written, and how it ended... well perhaps i will still love you for that.

only a little bit, though. you're on probation from here on out. bennoda will stay with me until you prove i can trust to leave them in your care again :(

in the mean time, write me moar bennoda pls. now. thank you.

From: lplover22

Date: 2008-10-22

Chapter: 1

Great story. You don't see many sci-fi LP fics. In fact I think this is the only one I've read. I loved it. *adds to favs* I like how you went back and forth. Normally this bugs me, but you really pulled it off. My favorite line: "Remember me, Michael. And live." I actually got a little choked up. Once again Great Story!!! *goes off to reread*

From: ~HalfAssDramaQueen~

Date: 2008-10-18

Chapter: 1

The ending *sniffs* brakes my heart.

Great story though, even if its not an original idea I still love how you put your own little twist into the story.

Love it.

From: shinobi

Date: 2008-10-13

Chapter: 1

*copies and pastes*

This was AMEZZING.

I'm not even sure where to start?

I fricking love futuristic stories, especially those of the war/conflict style. I think it's because, y'know, there's elements of these things that could and may well happen? I like the excitement aspect of it all, and this story was so brilliantly written, that I was drawn in with your words from the start and loved every moment of it. It was so intriguing, and I love that it gradually came together and then ended with Chester's note, a simple explanation to something so complicated and heart wrenching.

This was hauntingly beautiful, I could totally go on forever about how much this rocked and how my heart was beating because I was so curious and in need to know what was going to happen. I especially loved Mike and Chester's relationship and pretty much this rocked my world (:

From: Lee

Date: 2008-10-12

Chapter: 1

Oh my jesus clusterfuck. <333

This story was LOVE. I absolutely adore the concept of a futuristic world torn by terrorism and secrecy. How you don't really know your neighbor, how trust is something to be wary with. And then you have Mike and Chester, the two humans left who seem to be the only ones sensible enough to realize how wrong it all is... the only ones who want life to be lived and not surrendered to.

The part where all of the people were being captured for being terrorists, I thought that was the most frightening part. The woman and her child and etc., it seemed scary that it was anyone and everyone, and the reality of being captured was the scariest thing to Mike and Chester. The way they cried.

"Love in the time of terror is shameless."

"They fall into each other with the fervor that comes to men who know they are about to die."

My two favorite lines.

I can't praise this story enough. I'm in love with it. <33

From: MissB

Date: 2008-10-11

Chapter: 1

OMG!!! Total love. This is brilliant. I love the details. You've created a fucked up world that is not only imaginable but in this story absolutely believable. You've captured the emotions so well during all the futuristic elements and the letter totally broke my heart. It's so heroic and yet to the people you leave behind so tragic as well.

Love in the time of terror is shameless!

What a quote!!!

This is really, really great and I'm not saying that because I'm a sucker for AU's. It's really outstanding.

Keep it up,

much love


From: mike watanabe

Date: 2008-10-11

Chapter: 1

This is brilliant, and I enjoy it even more than your amazing fluff. The sole idea of freedom fighters hook me up with this story. You have this way of describing the 'future' scene that makes everything looks so real like I'm living the story. I love the secrets, the terror, all the underground streams running through the story that leads to the surprising and touching ending. And yet a little fluff and hints of their sexual relationship <s>rampant sex</s> make it all so cute, and so 'Elisa-ish'. And god, the letter! That brings tear to my eyes. Thank you for writing such an awesome story! :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2008-10-11

Chapter: 1

Your fic is gorgeous and different from the rest of fics. You show me two kinds of love, which the ordinary and the great.

From: Ben

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

im speechless, its an incredible fanfic...

From: L~T

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1


I have been thinking for something to say to this for a couple hours but failed miserably and just added it to faves.

BUT. I am back because I figured I could try to find at least something in my speechlessness to say.

First of all - LOVE FUTURE!FICS This was insanely amazing and really played out like a great sci!fi movie.



Secondly, I love your characterization. They seem so human and lovable and you really to empathize with them, especially during the explosions and the guns going off and them cuddling each other on the bed. YAY.

Lastly, I loved the imagery in this. So so so so so realistic and gritty and futuristic and ZOMG *flail*


The ending just got to me. It really did. So brilliant how you ended with the letter. GAH! *runs around in circles*

<33 :)

From: punkrocker

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

Beautifully written, loved it! I wouldn't mind another chapter or two on this, it would be a challenge for you to add on this this.. however, I think it would be well worth it!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

damn that was pretty freakin' good! I enjoyed reading that! :D Wonderful job *faves*

From: swsrd

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

Had I ever told you how much I love you and your story? If not, then now, I TOTALLY LOVE IT.

REMEMBER HIM AND LIVE, Mike, just as Chester told you.

Now I gonna go and hide myself to cry.

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

The ending was so sad.....*crying*

but the feeling so good, I really love this story.

I could see a innocent but fortitudinous Chester. Love and belief, the choose between these would definitely be a tragedy but also beautiful at the same time.

The memory is beautiful too.

Hope that the one who live could remember the one who died, and live together with the part that supposed to belong to the dead.

Fantasic story! Amazing work! :D

From: stardust001

Date: 2008-10-10

Chapter: 1

I'm speechless.



Hats off.

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