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From: Lee

Date: 2008-08-20

Chapter: ?

This was so cute! <33 You write the best fluffy fics without making it seem too cute, too corny and cheesy. It's always natural and that's what I love about your stories. ^_^


I loved the ending with them tackling each other on the bed. Stuff like that makes me smile incredibly, the playfulness and how they were laughing in each other's mouths and everything. loveloveloveeeee. <33

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-08-20

Chapter: ?

AWWWW~~XD!

Bret Mikels Shinoda/Axl Rosington! YAY!

That was really beautiful, they have cute love and hot life, golden, bright, yummmmy sweet~!I love this so much!

Amazing job! <333

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-08-20

Chapter: ?

aww that was cute and hot :D I enjoyed that

From: liberating.labia

Date: 2008-08-20

Chapter: ?

elisa, make sweet fictional love to me. pls.


i love this and the sweetness and the complexity expressed through the simplest of phrasing. mike saying i love you and it sounding too loud, too awkward, too something, is so perfect and aligns perfectly with chester's delayed response. their relationship, so perfectly crafted and so goofy but so deep, just makes my heart explode. i love it, and the fluffy but not too fluffy [suddenly the world is beautiful and bright and for just a little while, completely perfect? GUH MARRY ME.] ending. basically, you're awesome.

From: starscream

Date: 2008-08-20

Chapter: ?

Again what I like about your work is how you say so much with so few words; you never overdo anything with a bunch of superfluous crap. And at the same time, it's not too short for my liking. Of course somebody had to write Bret Mikels Shinoda/Axl Rosington slash :P and I'm glad it was you. The way Chester encouraged Mike to keep the wig you just knew WHAT he wanted him to keep it for. And how he had Mike fuck him whilst wearing it, lmao, priceless. What really struck me was Mike going to the bathroom mirror to look at himself in the wig. I couldn't decide what I thought he was doing but it didn't really matter because Chester took it off of him. He was in love with Mike, not just his goofiness, not just him in that stupid wig. He regarded MIKE when he told him he loved him, not the fun they have in bed, although he quite obviously loves that too. And how you kept the ending light a fluffy by including the wig again and having them tackle to the bed was perfecto~ I wouldn't have my Bret Mikels Shinoda/Axl Rosington slash any other way. :]

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