Wow, sucks to be Chester in this one. He seemingly can't choose between Mike and Talinda because while the former takes great care of him, the latter is where his kids and family are. When the decision's made for him (which is probably good, as his disorder would have prevented him from choosing on his own), he still can't be happy because he now has to fear that Mike will leave him too. And Mike, well, I don't believe he's truly made his own decision to stay, either. It's almost like he's accepted that he's stuck in the situation.

Some grammatical errors here and there, but altogether a good read. I would have liked to know more about where/how/why his disorder came about in the first place, if only to ground his situation more. But I still enjoyed it. :)

nice feeling, i was registered for review, this is the first, good story!

It's a difficult decision for Chester, he has to lose something, but it's worth, I guess, as long as Mike is there for him. The feeling is sweet, I love that, thank you for sharing the story.=]

That's hurt and sad, but still have hope, poor men. They least have time, and have each other.

Awww, hope Mike can really save Chester, save the broken heart.

Whatever, I like it very much~

Great job! :D

awww poor Chester D: *hugs him*