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The Big Boss by Nicole Hayley

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From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

"Well, I did say you could have my banana..." Oh man that line; loved it so much I felt the need to quote it. You're doing a great job, really, looking forward to more.

From: Lee (logged out)

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Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

Damn you Brad for walking in on their sexy time! D: I liked this chapter, the blowjob under the desk was hot. I could imagine SO many things going wrong but thankfully Brad didn't notice anything. xD Nice work, can't wait for more.

From: No~One

Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

*also sings* i'll give you my dirty little secret. hehehe i love that song. lol that was awesome! please update soon!

From: Ashes

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Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

*sings: i'll keep u my dirty little secret* lol this is soooooooo good!!!!! i hope everything goes good ^_^

From: LP_babe

Email: loggedout

Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

HAHA at Brad! What a douche! for always interupting their moments.


I am really liking this story. It's all getting juicy haha =P I like the idea of Mike being Chester's boss and that they're doing this all in secret woot! And the Banana bit...bahahaha, cracked me up at the same time happy in my pants to see Chester do the dirty on him.


PLEASE UPDATE<3

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

..."little secret"...Oh~ohoh...I got excited more and more, about this...

Update soon, please~ XD

From: astraloree

Date: 2008-04-08

Chapter: 5

Loving this piece...cant wait for an update. Chester portrayal is absolutely adorable...enough teasing already...on with the slash...lol...;p

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-04-07

Chapter: 5

DAMN YOU BRAD! XD I really do fucking love this story! <333

From: No~One

Date: 2008-04-07

Chapter: 4

"I know what that means"

Dude, I could so imagine Chester's little sing song voice in his head lol. It was just kinda there which is a good thing. I lovee this. update soon!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-04-07

Chapter: 4

The kiss is really hot and sweet, when they kissed, Mike grasped Chester’s ass and Chester grabbed Mike’s tie, only thinking about this picture makes me very excited...XD

Awesome job!~

Update soon,please~

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2008-04-07

Chapter: 4

Dude this fic is awesome! There are very few fics that I love reading but this tops a lot *faves* I can't wait to read the next chapter!

From: jackster

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Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 4

i love Mikey

Chester he's giving you permission ingocnito is that spelled right oh well inudeo that also works get on with it already

From: Ashes

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Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 4

ok just read 'em all ... freaking great!!!!! .... hehehe mike is naughty lol

From: KillingLights

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Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 4

Just read all 4 chaps.

Great story.

Update soon. :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 4

I thought I could like what Mike's mean is.

From: LP_babe

Email: logged out

Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 4

Omg! I really do love this story.


Mike's character, Chester's adorable-ness just clashes perfectly. Well written as always and I seriously cant wait for the next<33

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 2

I just read all 3 chapters and I'm full of love for yooooou!

lol!

This is such a fun story and as mean as it sounds I can't wait to read about the consequences, so please update soon!

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 2

This story just got even better; like Lee said, it makes me feel happy inside for some reason, it's just very comforting. I hope you continue with this, it's really great.

From: Lee (logged out)

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Date: 2008-04-06

Chapter: 2

This story makes me happy inside. I don't know why, though. It's very charming, has a nice flow to it, and the chemistry between Mike and Chester is electrifying. It reminds me of old-time classic Bennoda, you know, just a nice simple storyline with cute things and it isn't going fast at all. I like this a lot and I hope you continue. :)

From: LP_babe

Email: logged out

Date: 2008-04-05

Chapter: 2

Ohhh. It's official; I love this story!



Mike and Chester = SO GOD DAMN! CUTE TOGETHER! I hope to see another speedy update because this story has got me interested as to what will happen and all.


xoxo.

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