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Memoirs of a Male Geisha by Vampire Princess

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From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-06-14

Chapter: 3

I know you're busy with other stories and all, but I'd probably shit a rainbow if I saw an update for this.

From: Alice

Date: 2009-04-24

Chapter: 3

Oh come on! Please update! PLEASE!

From: Poser_Series

Date: 2008-02-15

Chapter: 3

er...i neglected to say thank you for updating...."THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!" :-D

From: Poser_Series

Date: 2008-02-15

Chapter: 3

YAY!!! finally a new chap!..loved this one.chester is about to go into training and i'm guessing Chistine/Kristine's character is going be like Mameha...can't wait for the next installment!(^_^)

From: DrummerLadyBourdon

Date: 2008-02-14

Chapter: 3

*ch. 4*

[The door to the tea house slid open reveling a girl a few years older than me, with a round face and long black hair that fell lightly past her shoulders.] 8DD


[This caused her to smile softly at me, “A proper gentlemen, there aren’t many of those around nowadays.”] *licks rob* |D


[I was going to become a Geisha! I couldn’t wait to start going to school.] YAY!! 8DDD


*is excited for the next chappy*


<333

From: Sudercer

Date: 2008-02-14

Chapter: 3

I felt at home...like I was meant to hug this boy and be hugged in return. I hadn't felt that since I last saw my father and brother. I sighed softly, resting my head on Mike’s shoulder, realizing in the rare opportunity to be close to someone, no one ever really hugged me in the [Okiya, so it was nice to feel the connection a hug could bring. Even if it was between myself and a strange boy who insisted on calling me Chessy.] That line in particular made me "awww" and then giggle wildly.


Anyhow. I loved this :]]] Sorry for taking so damn long to review, when I wanted to reeeead I had no internet! rawr.


I think this made me fall in love with little mini Michael XDDD <3 Good job homieee.


I love you, and your writing :]


*returns to bothering you*

From: swsrd

Date: 2008-02-13

Chapter: 3

I'm very glad to see your updating.

But I also wonder why Mike is there, anyway Geisha Chester is very expectant.

Good job, and it deserves the long wait.^^

From: KillingLights

Email:

Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 3

Update soon please. I am enoying reading this.

It is interesting. :)

From: KingMichael

Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 3

I..I couldnt wait see little chaz become a Geisha~~

and i dont understand why mike stand there..


P.S like u story~~ update please~~

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2008-02-10

Chapter: 3

OHHHHH!!Geisha Chester!>o<WOW~~

I couldn’t wait to see Chester start going to school.XD

Update soon,please!!

From: nodabear89

Date: 2008-02-09

Chapter: 3

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yay another chapter!!! OMG @ Chessy XD XD XD

-danni

From: ~ILuvPopTarts~

Date: 2007-12-13

Chapter: 3

Hi! I'm apart of the new beta team, and what we're doing right now is reviewing all stories posted after November 20th.

Your progress so far seems a little rushed, if you slowed it down and made it more realistic, it wouldn’t seem that way (I know this is all about fiction, but there’s a certain point of realism that every reader is looking for, at least, realistic dialogue).

Throughout reading I noticed you never really explained what it meant to be a geisha, or what a geisha does, for some readers that might not have seen the movie.

I don’t think there’s enough emotion here, either. For instance, what kid is forced away from his home, from his life, all of a sudden, and his thoughts the next morning are “At least I don't have to wear uncomfortable clothes?”

It seems like a fan just came up with a plot out of inspiration from another plot, but didn’t think their’s all the way through. So if you find a neutral beta (there’s a beta request thread on the boards), let her know where you’re going with this, and take my advise, you should have a great story in no time=]

<3

From: KingMichael

Date: 2007-12-05

Chapter: 3

OMG,mike is a little boy!suprise meO[] O

what"s happen between tow little boy on next time><~~

From: Sudercer

Date: 2007-12-01

Chapter: 3

FINALLY read it YAY!


<3! I loved it :D and I lovvvve you :P

From: Poser_Series

Date: 2007-12-01

Chapter: 3

awww that was so cute!..but a little to short if you ask me...update soon (^_^)

Oh btw oc name guessing...

wendii-wendy

kerii-keri,kerry,or kelly

kasandora-cassandra


am i ryt? am i wrong?..pls tell me...

From: DrummerLadyBourdon

Date: 2007-11-30

Chapter: 3

["Oh," she said in a soft voice, her red lips parting to show perfect white teeth,] *thinks of mike’s pearly whites* XD nice.


[My mood suddenly fell, and I lowered my head, remembering all the fun times me and my brother used to have.] waaaaaw


["A danna is basically a man who helps the Geisha pay for any Kimonos or any daily expenses a Geisha will run into. Sometimes the relationships urn-"] *giggles* yay for kasan!


[The little boy looked up at me and I was frozen in shock at the deep chocolate eyes that were staring back at me, tears making them shine in the early morning sun.] squeeeee for mikey!!


[Mike blinked at me then smiled again, “I'm going to call you Chessy!”] ah ha ha ha aww what a place to leave off. :D



can’t wait for the next chapter. ;)


<333 DLB

From: Jen

Email: angelwings876@gmail.com

Date: 2007-11-30

Chapter: 3

awww...I think the meeting between Chaz and Mike was SOOO cute!


Please update soon, I'm loving this story!!!

From: nodabear89

Date: 2007-11-30

Chapter: 3

Awww, Chessy!! XD XD XD You just made my morning!! *huggles*

-danni

From: TYshangshan

Email:

Date: 2007-11-30

Chapter: 3

WOOW~~Lovely~

Chessy is a nice name~~LOL

From: swsrd

Date: 2007-11-30

Chapter: 3

wow***kisses***

I couldn't believe that you update soooo quickly~~

So this is how Chester and Mike meet each other?Err..well, a little bit different from what I thought and guessed, but still very cute, and I just love this little Mike with a big grin, I wish he could bring some sunshine to the darkness of poor chester's life...YEAH~~~wonderful chapter!!Keep going on...wait for the next..

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