Reviews
Memoirs of a Male Geisha by Vampire Princess
From: Poser_Series
Date: 2008-02-15
Chapter: 3
er...i neglected to say thank you for updating...."THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!" :-D
From: Poser_Series
Date: 2008-02-15
Chapter: 3
YAY!!! finally a new chap!..loved this one.chester is about to go into training and i'm guessing Chistine/Kristine's character is going be like Mameha...can't wait for the next installment!(^_^)
From: DrummerLadyBourdon
Date: 2008-02-14
Chapter: 3
*ch. 4*
[The door to the tea house slid open reveling a girl a few years older than me, with a round face and long black hair that fell lightly past her shoulders.] 8DD
[This caused her to smile softly at me, “A proper gentlemen, there aren’t many of those around nowadays.”] *licks rob* |D
[I was going to become a Geisha! I couldn’t wait to start going to school.] YAY!! 8DDD
*is excited for the next chappy*
<333
From: Sudercer
Date: 2008-02-14
Chapter: 3
I felt at home...like I was meant to hug this boy and be hugged in return. I hadn't felt that since I last saw my father and brother. I sighed softly, resting my head on Mike’s shoulder, realizing in the rare opportunity to be close to someone, no one ever really hugged me in the [Okiya, so it was nice to feel the connection a hug could bring. Even if it was between myself and a strange boy who insisted on calling me Chessy.] That line in particular made me "awww" and then giggle wildly.
Anyhow. I loved this :]]] Sorry for taking so damn long to review, when I wanted to reeeead I had no internet! rawr.
I think this made me fall in love with little mini Michael XDDD <3 Good job homieee.
I love you, and your writing :]
*returns to bothering you*
From: swsrd
Date: 2008-02-13
Chapter: 3
I'm very glad to see your updating.
But I also wonder why Mike is there, anyway Geisha Chester is very expectant.
Good job, and it deserves the long wait.^^
From: KillingLights
Email:
Date: 2008-02-10
Chapter: 3
Update soon please. I am enoying reading this.
It is interesting. :)
From: KingMichael
Date: 2008-02-10
Chapter: 3
I..I couldnt wait see little chaz become a Geisha~~
and i dont understand why mike stand there..
P.S like u story~~ update please~~
From: TYshangshan
Date: 2008-02-10
Chapter: 3
OHHHHH!!Geisha Chester!>o<WOW~~
I couldn’t wait to see Chester start going to school.XD
Update soon,please!!
From: nodabear89
Date: 2008-02-09
Chapter: 3
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Yay another chapter!!! OMG @ Chessy XD XD XD
-danni
From: ~ILuvPopTarts~
Date: 2007-12-13
Chapter: 3
Hi! I'm apart of the new beta team, and what we're doing right now is reviewing all stories posted after November 20th.
Your progress so far seems a little rushed, if you slowed it down and made it more realistic, it wouldn’t seem that way (I know this is all about fiction, but there’s a certain point of realism that every reader is looking for, at least, realistic dialogue).
Throughout reading I noticed you never really explained what it meant to be a geisha, or what a geisha does, for some readers that might not have seen the movie.
I don’t think there’s enough emotion here, either. For instance, what kid is forced away from his home, from his life, all of a sudden, and his thoughts the next morning are “At least I don't have to wear uncomfortable clothes?”
It seems like a fan just came up with a plot out of inspiration from another plot, but didn’t think their’s all the way through. So if you find a neutral beta (there’s a beta request thread on the boards), let her know where you’re going with this, and take my advise, you should have a great story in no time=]
<3
From: KingMichael
Date: 2007-12-05
Chapter: 3
OMG,mike is a little boy!suprise meO[] O
what"s happen between tow little boy on next time><~~
From: Sudercer
Date: 2007-12-01
Chapter: 3
FINALLY read it YAY!
<3! I loved it :D and I lovvvve you :P
From: Poser_Series
Date: 2007-12-01
Chapter: 3
awww that was so cute!..but a little to short if you ask me...update soon (^_^)
Oh btw oc name guessing...
wendii-wendy
kerii-keri,kerry,or kelly
kasandora-cassandra
am i ryt? am i wrong?..pls tell me...
From: DrummerLadyBourdon
Date: 2007-11-30
Chapter: 3
["Oh," she said in a soft voice, her red lips parting to show perfect white teeth,] *thinks of mike’s pearly whites* XD nice.
[My mood suddenly fell, and I lowered my head, remembering all the fun times me and my brother used to have.] waaaaaw
["A danna is basically a man who helps the Geisha pay for any Kimonos or any daily expenses a Geisha will run into. Sometimes the relationships urn-"] *giggles* yay for kasan!
[The little boy looked up at me and I was frozen in shock at the deep chocolate eyes that were staring back at me, tears making them shine in the early morning sun.] squeeeee for mikey!!
[Mike blinked at me then smiled again, “I'm going to call you Chessy!”] ah ha ha ha aww what a place to leave off. :D
can’t wait for the next chapter. ;)
<333 DLB
From: Jen
Email: angelwings876@gmail.com
Date: 2007-11-30
Chapter: 3
awww...I think the meeting between Chaz and Mike was SOOO cute!
Please update soon, I'm loving this story!!!
From: nodabear89
Date: 2007-11-30
Chapter: 3
Awww, Chessy!! XD XD XD You just made my morning!! *huggles*
-danni
From: TYshangshan
Email:
Date: 2007-11-30
Chapter: 3
WOOW~~Lovely~
Chessy is a nice name~~LOL
From: swsrd
Date: 2007-11-30
Chapter: 3
wow***kisses***
I couldn't believe that you update soooo quickly~~
So this is how Chester and Mike meet each other?Err..well, a little bit different from what I thought and guessed, but still very cute, and I just love this little Mike with a big grin, I wish he could bring some sunshine to the darkness of poor chester's life...YEAH~~~wonderful chapter!!Keep going on...wait for the next..
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From: xXloversxfadexX
Date: 2009-06-14
Chapter: 3
I know you're busy with other stories and all, but I'd probably shit a rainbow if I saw an update for this.