This may be your first effort on this site but it is one of the best fics I've read on here! I just started reading LP slash (I'm a refugee from AFI and MCR fandoms) and honestly most of the stuff here I can't get past the first few paragraphs of before the bad spelling (or using nothing but flowery prose and big words----all of which are misspelled) make me give up.

This was great though!

Keep it up!!!

Okay, first, woot and yay for intsant fucking. *woots* Anyway, i'm liking the way this is written and i'm interested. so update please? :D

{"I'm guessing it'll be decorated with lemons and painfully bright lights. Sour and in your face."} EPIC WIN. :D

Wow, this story was very well written in my opinion. It was cute and very enjoyable. I love Mike and Chaz togetherness... LOL. Update soon please! :)

hahah~~it's so lovely mike and chester~

u write great~!

please update soon~

WoW ~~~~

Yeah!!!It is just so hooot.....M/C^O^

You are an amazing author..

Love the charactors and your writing style

Plz update soon, I'm waiting for it =3=

lasjlfka. What?! Gahhh! I fucking love this. [dances around] I really want to read more so I hope there's new chapters soon! <3<3

Wow. I am already hooked to this story. O__O; Chester's character is flippin' hot and I want to see how their relationship progresses. Can't wait for more. :)

Wow~~It's so HOT and cute~Chaz and Mike~Yes~I love this!

For the sexy barman~LOL

Update soon,please~

I thought it was funny tehehe. I love the way you describe Chaz. I likey his personality. Mike's too boring >.< Well whatever it's your story

Update soon!

ehehe that was funnah! I loved this chapter :) Update soon please

-VP

Oooo! I likey.

I likey Chester and Mikey.

*blushes*

sorry about that... worst rhyme ever...

Your writing is great and I look forward to more from you.

I also LOVE your characterization of Chester

WOW it's a cute start! Update it soon please!

WOW it's a cute start! Update it soon please!