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Paralyzer by BlackMagick

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From: Bennodaluver234

Date: 2007-11-23

Chapter: 1

Eep I forgot to review. Anyway here's what I have to say. Every time I hear that fucking song now I think of that story. Probably I don't get sick of it even though they play it ENDLESSLY on the southwest coast of florida. Eh whatever..It was hot and M/C so I'm happy

From: nodabear89

Date: 2007-10-08

Chapter: 1

Dirty, sexy, to the point. I love it!

-danni

From: amarice

Date: 2007-10-08

Chapter: 1

yeah, too fast for me too...where's the teasing?!? I want some description of the sexy-dancing they did ;) good story anyway, just one thing: NEVER USE SOAP AS A LUBE!!! I think that Chester would pass out from the pain, just try it for yourself and you will see how much it hurts...maybe if it would be some special soap for babies or something like that, but I doubt that they have those in clubs :) just hope that you will use some other kind of lube in your next stories...

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2007-10-08

Chapter: 1

Wow~sooooo HOT!~

I love this so much!good job~!=D

From: MOMO

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Date: 2007-10-08

Chapter: 1

I think Chester is so sexy with some man in club.

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-10-07

Chapter: 1

hah that was yummy

From: Lee (logged out)

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Date: 2007-10-07

Chapter: 1

Oh this fic totally changed the way I view that song. XD That was hot, but personally it went too fast for me. It was still good, though, any nightclub fic is. :) Good work.

From: Bourdon Dork

Date: 2007-10-07

Chapter: 1

Mmm that was hot =]


love the song too.

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