this is great. continue please

BRAD!! What the hell!!

The second one was very angsty. Not sure if I liked it. But first part still amazes me.

Well, me and drabbles...moth to a flame, that sort of thing. So it's great to see more of them on LPF. I like your style. I'm not a Rob fan, outright, but it's always interesting to write about him because not only does he have a "past", but it's so vague and enigmatic that we're left with lots of room to explore him through fiction.

*digressing* I particularly like the second one - good take on Chester and Rob encountering similar issues, but at completely different times. It must be frustrating for Rob to watch Chester do this to himself, knowing that there's a feasible way for him to turn his life around; but at the same time, Rob's perhaps forgetting how hard it is to even admit you have a problem when you're in the middle of the chaos itself.

Keep posting these, I'll be on the lookout. :)

[or whatever his poison of choice happens to be tonight.] *likes that line*

[but that doesn’t mean he doesn’t get his hopes up every time Chester comes to him and tells him it will never happen again.] :3 aww

[He wonders if the others think he likes being know as the 'boring one', who doesn’t drink, or smoke because he doesn’t think its quite fair that because he’s dealt with his problems he’s not 'fun'.] *refuses to believe that of his past* DDD:

[He knows the sheer hell of withdrawals.] *huggles him, licks* l}

*nods* my poor rob. this was really good. i love how the emotion intensified towards the end.

-DLB

That was the shortest, yet most powerful chapter I have ever read on here yet. That was just... Honestly? Brilliant. That's right. I said brilliant.

You know, I was going to review quoting a passage. The first paragraph in the chapter, which was so powerful and full of true feeling that it made my shoulders cringe. But then I continued to read, and found that if I were to quote the most powerful part of the chapter, it would be the whole thing.

Really, you're an awesome writer, as far as I can see now. I have no idea what's in the future for Rob right now, but I know this:

I will check back in to repolish my memory of you next time you add a chapter, only to remember your story as the one with amazing writing.

I love it. It was just so powerful.

[He loved the ease of waking up naturally, with the sun shining on his face.] I could wake up easily to if I woke up next to him like that *spitbubble*

[Somewhere along the way, things changed, but Rob couldn’t remember when.] nooo :(

[He stirs, gives a little groan, and rolls onto his front, burying his face in the mountain of pillows, willing himself back to sleep.] mmm…=P~~~~~~~

[He often wonders what it would take to break this cycle of monotony.] oh boy… *grins like a 3 year old with candy* l}}

short and sweet. nice! :D

-DLB