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From: Ms.Jawbreaker

Date: 2013-07-27

Chapter: 1

PLEASE MAKE A SECOND ONE ((and maybe more?!)) UPDATE!!!

From: Trash.

Date: 2012-05-31

Chapter: 1

THOSE SEATS BETTER GO BACK DAMNIT

From: mistofstars

Date: 2009-06-29

Chapter: 1

beautiful, funny, awesome! I LOVE IT! Especially... the weird thing is, just in the last sentences they actually kissed for the first time, but this fic was sooo bennoda, even without all slashy deeds *_* Anyhow, I laughed so many times and the end was so cute <3 And I guess I saw myself in this story too, because I'm moody and picky too ^^" I wish there would have been a sequel or second chapter though! Great job!:)

From: BlackFairy

Date: 2009-03-09

Chapter: 1

awwwwwww...I loved it

From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2007-12-29

Chapter: 1


From: KingMichael

Date: 2007-10-27

Chapter: 1

!!!U write so CUTE~~~~ love it~ <3

really cute chaz~!

From: ~ILuvPopTarts~

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: 1

that was really adorable and witty=]

it made me oddly happy lol

<333

From: liberating.labia

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: 1

i loved this! and chester's bitchyness was far from hot, but shit rather amusing. and mike being all "but i thought this would be speshul!" was absolutely adorable. i love the way you build relationships. great work.

From: Scissors

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Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: 1

Cutting.


Wow, I have no complaints. I love how you portrayed Chester in this. His sarcastic remarks had me in hysterics. This was delightfully comical as well as Romantic and I wouldn't object to you adding more to this. Great job! You deserve to win the challenge.


Cut.

From: Bennodaluver234

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: 1

I can just see Mike and Chester going camping or something like that and on the way that happens. Chester being a bitch and Mike just being..Mike..lol nice

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Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

I Loved this! It was so adorable. *sorry for the shitty review* :)

From: Lee

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

I really loved this story. The only (well, ok, not only) thought that was running through my mind was "Holy shit, this is just like Chester and Mike." You got Chester down from his meticulousness, his bitter sarcasm, his whole new "rock star" attitude, and so forth. And then you see Mike, that down-to-the-basics guy where celebrity status doesn't really affect his views on life. This was a great piece of work, you should be proud of it.


*favs*

From: Cindy

Email:

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

I adore this! I love how much of a diva Chester indeed is, and then Mike just owns him toward the end. This definitely deserves to win the challenge! :]]

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

aw that was cute! I loved this story!

From: Kelly

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

Pure genious.

From: Crysthal

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

Yaaaaay~! I loved it! *^^*


This was cool, and the way Chaz was bitching seems incredibly right!


Well done, really!

From: dark_red

Email: copypaste@yay.WIN

Date: 2007-09-13

Chapter: 1

Okay, let's ignore the fact that this is the STORY OF MY LIFE. I'm not kidding. If I don't put my foot down, Nick would buy the tent, the gas stove, and a fucking CANOE and insist we go camping. Not that I don't like camping...I'm just in agreement with The Chaz Man that the money could be better spent elsewhere. :D


I fucking loved this. Your Bennoda, whether it's a friendship or something more, never fails to give me that warm and squishy feeling inside. There's something real to the way you write relationships - the banter, the playful teasing, etc. You don't turn it into a soap opera (complete with melodrama, perfect sex, and cheesy dialogue) and that makes it more believable, to me. Your fluff is entertaining. And FUNNY. I really liked the whole thing with the car, and Chester's sarcasm was a nice touch.


That you can write a "romance" story without graphic sex, etc., that still makes an impact is impressive. I like that you focus more on the relationship itself than on all the titillating things they do (not that the latter isn't good too, of course). Kudos. <33

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