it's some stupid hour of the morning but I've read every chapter today (i'd started it earlier and for some reason stopped...no idea why).

Anyways my lovely this story is horrible and compelling and made me shout at my computer...this is good - traumtic story but amazing writing.

Please kick me into leaving a better review when I am more awake.

And I'll ask again why your stories aren't in book shops? and thank you for putting them here.

Holy moly!! This is so incredibly well written that I was fighting tears through most of it.Absolutely heartbreaking.Please update soon.

Wow... I can't make a sentence.

It's great so much.

What's happens next? I can't wait next chapter!

Please update soon!!!

T.T why did you stop there? My heart nearly stopped when I saw you updated. I feel like stabbing myself right now. Honestly, I can't find words to describe my feelings at all. It's like I have just been struck by heaven lights, lol. But seriously, this chapter is genius. I read, and I ingrained every single words into my mind. It's so real that it makes everything else around sound stupid and unreal when comparing to your story. The emotion is intense and your writing skill - srsly, I have to be very retarded to repeat again and again how talented you are.

This chapter makes me so happy, like it has come to a climax - Chester has confronted his mother and thanks God, Mike's parents have found out his secret. The family relationships/dramas were reflected perfectly, as well as the human behaviors explanation, in this chapter.

I really can't wait for the next chapter :)

Goodness gracious! D:

You really intrigue me...I freaked when I found out this updated! I hope you update soon :]

Sorry my review is so lame, I'm not too good with them but honestly I adore this and I love the way you write. Keep it up.

It took my brain a second to register that this story had been updated when I saw the title on the top of the story page. This is not to make you feel guilty but I just didn't want to get my hopes up. Let's just say this was *well* worth the wait.

FINALLY!!! This is all out in the open and Mike's parents know. Thank you for not letting them blame Michael for any of this. My heart has already broke for him so many times while reading this, I don't know if I could handle rejection from his parents. And yes, I am talking about these characters as if they truly exist in this manner becuase this story so wonderfully written that I am completely absorbed in it. I just hope that Chester will come ut ok in all this. Cannot wait for the next update.

I almost peed myself when i saw you updated, L~T mentioned it on msn a couple days ago

so, vmasdlfjsdlngasdfmgkf !!

lol, you have an awesome talent of writing and conveying emotions. when Chester told his mom he hated her, that part was like WHOA. also, i teared up when Mike's mom was holding him as he cried=[

big difference between their mothers, they're like polar opposites.

loved it!

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I can't even imagine what I would do/think if I just found out my child was going through what Mike is going through in this. This is so fucking insane. I don't even know what to say. I want something bad to happen to Chester's father though. I can't wait to read the next update!

that was so powerful. i didn't see mike ever telling his parents what was going on. so a mixture of relief and happiness is what i felt reading it. it was powerful, yes, i already used that word, i know.

i cannot wait for more.

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wow. again.

this chapter.. i don't even know where to begin. there is so much i want to (but will probably fail to) say.

the comparing of chester to being a cartoon world. that floored me. every word of him escaping to animated worlds and wishing life were like that with the stupid gags and the same pattern over and over and the constant, safe, tried and tested endings. and chester wishing, that when his father took him to that bar that he WAS in such a world. and then him suddenly feeling like he was; like how could such things happen to him.

;kjnsldgf.

that was just brilliant. i can't even begin to salute you for that, it just made this fic, if possible, even more than just a fanfiction. there's always something more about your writing.

anyway. the drama in this chapter was so fast paced and astonishing. that things like that DO happen is just heartbreaking and harrowing to say the least. i was just reading it with wide eyes. the audacity of the teacher calling chester brave? chester's fast growing realisiation that his father is beyond fucked up. and that though he loves him; he shows him little choice but to try and get away from him and stop what is happening.

i'm rambling and probably not coherant and certainly cannot spell tonight.

i just like how deep and involved this story is. how it makes me stop and think and how very real and raw it is.

onto the next chapter (:

sfas ifyafoxyfaxfalfh!

gah!

i hate it when it comes to the reviews and i can't possibly say anything to express how amazing this story is.

this chapter just made me want to cry and hug Mike and kill that fucking stupid teacher.

!!!

everything about this is so mindblowingly real and written in such a gentle way.

i guess that's what i love most about this - it's not insanely graphic but at the same time you already know how disgusting this creature is around Mike. I believe it's really self-explanitory.

*squee*

i was so happy to see this update, i ran around the room a few times lol

love this as always and am looking forward to the next chapter :) <33

just catching up (:

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wow. just wow. i really liked the in depth nature of this chapter. it was heavy going but i mean that in a positive way. to see what had happened from the start from chester's eyes and in seeing him coming to terms with it - or more realising how wrong it all is - ever since mike came into his life. and to see the teacher so weak, thinking he's not wrong and jikwaeskrdf it makes me angry/sad/disgusted/astonished all at the same time.

this, i have said a thousand times before, is such a tricky 'subject' to focus on. that you do it beauitfully is pretty outstanding, as rightly so, there is nothing beauitful about it at all. but you keep a wonderful balance of feeling and fact and right from wrong and you also give good accounts of both side of the stories. the teacher, i feel sorry for. for he is weak and sick and surely his payback HAS to come?

;lanesdfgf

i am now going to read more (:

Thank you for updating this.

I'm relieved and scared that Mike's parents know now. I'm scared for Chester and how he'll react to this, how his parents will react to this. I'm hoping Mike will have the courage to tell the doctor/police the truth.

I'm looking forward to the next update. I think you are taking on a hard subject with that, but are doing a great job. :)

Thank fuck for that! You've got me in tears here ;_; love it as always!

This updated while I was gone!

Duuuude, that was amazing, this had already been on my favorites and I've been hoping it'd be updated for SO long. That chapter was amazing (although terribly sad)and intense! Wonderful ending too. Agh! This was just mind blowing for me...

I adore the way you write! Very detailed and worded perfectly, keeps your attention til the very end. Can't wait for the next update :]

No, no, no...

This chap was makes me sick...

Of cource I love this story, you know.

But this chap was really really...NO!

Poor Mike, Poor Chester!!!

I hate that bastard!!

I wish they'll be happy.

Very glad to see an update up!

I throughly enjoyed this chapter just as I enjoyed ever chapter before it. Your writing is so tight and...well put together. Everything seems to have a meaning and not one paragraph feels like filler. I definitely aspire to improve my writing after reading your work lol.

You once again made me very uncomfortable with having the Teacher around, but what's even more amazing however is how I feel myself almost reflecting what Mike is feeling. I feel as if these are easier to read because it has basically become the norm. And I could feel Mike frustration with the Weekend of Horrors Convention. Something he LOVES thrown back into his face by the thing he hates.

Having the Shinoda's peek in Mike's room is definitely building to something. I think I was dead on with my prediction of 3 more updates.

Now, 2 more. Just a prediction :D

Great work! And keep it up!

it's sad that such things can be easily hidden from people that love the ones that are going through this mess. this story really hits home for me because someone i love very much was put through this and no one helped him when he needed it. wasn't much older than poor mikey...i'm glad mike's dad is finally noticing something's wrong and it saddens me poor mike has given up (or so it seems)damn you and your good story writing and your cliffhangers, lol :p i'm in love with this story in a sick and twisted way. i can't wait to see what chester will do. i'm hoping he gets that gun...or a sharp pointy object...anyway, i love htis story and cannot wait for an update! no rushing though. wonder such as this story can't be rushed. good luck updating!

I hate that the teacher is taking everything a step further, in so many ways. In the last chapter, he crossed a new line with Chester, and he seems to be doing the same with Mike now, by taking him on a trip - away from family, friends, and anyone who can help him (there's that isolation tactic, again). Furthermore, the teacher takes him to a horror movie convention, which just makes things more confusing for Mike. I love that it makes him realize the lack of value in material things, but he gets them anyway and resigns himself to his fate, because he knew he'd have to "pay" for them.

I'm glad Mike's parents are finally coming around and waking up. His father's realization that he never liked history gave me chills, CHILLS! Anyway, it moves the story along, so overall this was a very good chapter. I like the direction you took with it and the way you wrote it. There's so much more I could say, but I'm still a bit incoherent about this story and have to read it many more times to let everything sink in.

Update soon...ish? :)

This update was well worth the wait. :)

ABOUT FRIGGIN TIME THE DAD NOTICED!!! OMG! >.<' Lol, I nearly fell over all excited and what not. Again you have not only captured the reader's attention, but created another eerie feeling of being helpless. GI so bow to you for this

*bows*

-danni