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*MindReader* by DrummerLadyBourdon

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From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-07-01

Chapter: 10

Well this is fun to read! I think I squealed, giggled, and melted about 40 times throughout the entire ordeal. The chapters are kind of short and shallow, like more needs to be going or addressed.


Update soon, honeyboo!

From: NalaNyaSilmaRyl

Date: 2009-06-27

Chapter: 10

aaaaaaaaaaaaaa why did u stop updatiiing??

From: Franky

Email: jfhollands@hotmail.com

Date: 2008-05-11

Chapter: 10

you HAVE to upload that last chapter soon young lady...

you left me just AS or even MORE intrigued than after watching the first two LOTR movies ...so unfair!! hehehe ;)


ps. you just found yourself another faithfull reader ...LOVE YOUR STUFF!!!


I always did say I love the way your mind works and you just outdid yourself wiv this!!


you'll be hearing from me again, cant wait to read the rest of the stories!!


although I SHOULD prolly have some dinner before I continue!! lol =P

X X X

From: Franky

Email: jfhollands@hotmail.com

Date: 2008-05-11

Chapter: 10

AAAAAAARGH!!!!

I donnow what to say ...honestly!!

just FLYING through these chapters!!!!

I cant find myself to take a brake even and I'm DYING to go to the loo too!! hehehe


"Mike continued his circular motion, watching as Rob's pants steadily become tented."


ok, maybe that line isnt the most appropriate for proving what I think, which is how you are one GIFTED storyteller but it sure made me laugh when I read it!! DAMN you're good CJ!!! ...off to read some more now!! lol =P

From: Franky

Email: jfhollands@hotmail.com

Date: 2008-05-11

Chapter: 10

k, now I feel all BUGEYED just reading NON-STOP!!!


I LOVE this... you made me giggle when just before the fourth chapter is it? you say your imagination can only go so far? well it goes far enough if you ask me!! As you know, I've only experienced something like that the one time myself, but now after the 6th chapter I see you describe every tingle, every breath and sigh wiv nothing less than perfection!!


I've had goosebumps on more than one ocassion now just reading and I cant wait to read more ...so WTF am I doing writing ...I'm not done reading yet!!!


brb!! ;)

From: Franky

Email: jfhollands@hotmail.com

Date: 2008-05-11

Chapter: 10

Hey ma girl!! ...just finished the second chapter so far and loving it!!

sorry I took so long to come around, but so far and only on the second chapter, I see it was DEF worth the wait!

you have SUCH a way wiv words and a DEFINITE talent for descriptive coz I can almost feel as I'm in the same room as Mike, Rob and the rest ...my fav line so far in the both chapters I read is "When he started hearing about himself in Rob's thoughts..." so cute!!

wish I could read minds... anyway MUST know what happens next!! hehehe ...will let ya know what I think after I'm done!! =P


X X X

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2007-11-29

Chapter: 10

I STAYED UP TILL TWO IN THE MORNING TO CONTINUE READING THIS (while I SHOULD have been writing an essay on Anne of Green Gables... not that it's your fault this essay is boring the HELL out of me)

AND THEN YOU JUST LEAVE IT AT THAT!!! I hope you update soon

*continues trying (and failing miserably) to be intimidating*

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2007-11-29

Chapter: 10

You have just officially rocked my socks!

I was gonna read the whole thing before leaving a big, long... *cough*... REVIEW [get your mind out of the gutter! ;)] at the end. This was TOO HOT to miss commenting on. At the moment it's 1:13 in the morning so I may not finish reading tonight but look forward to another review in the near future!

From: Hybrid Dragon

Date: 2007-06-23

Chapter: 10

They can't hear each other anymore? something tells me some crazy shit is about to go down!

Sweet job, i say this because i rarely read anything other than m/c. Lovin' it! Update!

From: xxdarktearsxx

Date: 2007-05-28

Chapter: 10

I can't believe I haven't read this story until now! It's soooo good, hopefully you update soon! Please doooo.

From: linkinparkluvr224

Date: 2007-05-21

Chapter: 10

Oh. My. Gosh!!!


You soooo need to update again! I loooove love love love love looove IT! <33333


My story will be up shortly. -.-

*is a slow writer*


OH well, back to this. Chapter 6 is de baste (in the words of Chester Bennington)! XD


Rob = =D <3333333

Ok I'm done now. XD


~Jenny

From: cheap-fantasy

Email:

Date: 2007-05-13

Chapter: 10

ha, that last post was me! i forgot to put my name!

that's how cool i am. :D

From:

Email:

Date: 2007-05-10

Chapter: 10

I knew it was brad... i was just testing you ^.^; i swear

anywhozz, *gasp* MAJOR LOSS-IGE OF MIND READING WONDER! curses...poor them :(

this is going to have a weird ending, like mike waking up to a goose gnawing on his head.

or not... o well, either way i award you a rob cookie, a canadian 100$ bill (it has a 'robert bordon' on it. i thought that was so cool) & 5 STARS! :D

From: Converse

Date: 2007-05-01

Chapter: 10

sorry it took so long for me to review ^_^

But we still rock the long reviews right? XD


[“Should we get it?” The naked emceed asked wrapped up in the sheets and his lover.] get's vivid imaginations,,, *drools* hmmmm


[Should he feel so inclined, the dark bud of Rob’s nipple was within the reach of the emcee’s velvet tongue.] i'd do soo,,, hell yeah *drools*



[Rob groaned softly as he sat up and swung his long muscular legs over the side. Mike pouted at the loss of the warmth and comfort.] *shoves mike out of the picture and climbs in the bed waiting for rob to make sweet love to him*


[Beneath all that, were the drummer’s slender hips.] *dies* god how i want to toutch those*


[Those wonderful hips that sent Mike soaring to Heaven and back each time they rocked inside him.] how i'd like to be mike


[Am I really this fucking easy? All I have to do is just look at him and I get hard…] if i were a guy i'd have the same fucking problem


[“Well, I was about to take a shower, and you managed to wake Mike up. You win a prize.” Rob explained with a grin, his dark chocolate eyes glancing] *dies* he's sooo smexy here


[HOLY SHIZNIT!! I CAN’T HEAR ROB’S THOUGHTS ANYMORE!!] i actually knew what was going to happen,, just cause you told me soo,,, but still like it ^_^


[“Ok…Like, why do you guys look like a bug just crawled up your asses?”] brad as suptile as ever


[Rob just cleared his throat, his mind flitting back to their unexpected romp, and blushed a cherry pink.] cute ^_^ *dies*


[“Wha? Oh, yeah…Like, Phoenix and I were talking, and we were wondering if there is anything going on between you two, because you like, have been acting kinda odd lately…”] again,,, soooooo suptile *winks*



[If Rob wasn’t a drummer or an accountant, he sure could’ve passed for an actor.] acountatn=number fucker and hell... i'd like to be one of those numbers


[“Y-yeah…that’s kinda what happened… He wanted to talk to you guys about something and I wanted also, but he wouldn’t go, so we did Rock, Paper, Scissors and I lost…”] they are just kids trapped inside the body of a grown up


[A heavy sigh found its way past the younger man’s satin lips as breathed out in relief.] *licks lips absantly*


gooodd!!! i almost died reading this,,, to bad there's only gonna be one chap *cries* but please let them get their 'power' back


anywhoos,,, that was completely random


ciao bella


<3

From: Me

Date: 2007-04-24

Chapter: 10

[[firm mocha butt cheeks scrunching cutely as he walked]] ROTFLZ That one was GOOD



first of all: OMG! DLB dedicated a chapter to me! i love this story, i loved it since the beggining. Why did you take so long to update? I also noticed that you liked my little Rob-Joe-icecream story, and let me tell you that i felt very flattered that the most significat RobLover enjoyed it so much.


As for the story: NOOOOOO!! No more mind sex anymore?!?! Wny did they lost it so suddenly? PLEASE dont take another [god knows how many] months to update!!!


Me

From: lissa

Email:

Date: 2007-04-23

Chapter: 10

Loooooove Mike/Rob!!


Need more now, please?

From: EmBeR

Date: 2007-04-22

Chapter: 10

Oh my goodness, they lost their connection? I wonder why... and as for the last chapters and the comment on your profile, thank you so much, you're the greatest, update soon!

From: Vixenla

Date: 2007-04-21

Chapter: 10

*gasps* Mikey lost it?!? Poor baby...*smirks*


As for last(?) chapters, awww you so sweet!! \m/ :-)

From: Kelly

Date: 2007-04-21

Chapter: 10

oh my god hahahahaha SCRUNCH

I'm so freakin hyped! I loved this chapter but I think I need to see what he...hmm yeah..Joe is gonna ask LOL

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-04-21

Chapter: 10

heh thanks for the lil note in your profile *blushes* I'm glad you think of me as one of your friends! Anways! Aren't you happy that it didn't take me forever to review this time? I know I am! Anyawys......umm......o yeah! Wonderful chapter! See I told you you'd be able to get passed the writers block you were havin'.


Peace!


-VP

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